服装— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and include one specific example of the casual clothing you choose to make the answer more vivid. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a clear topic sentence. Replace "on weekends or other holidays" with a shorter phrase like "at weekends".

示例: I usually wear my school uniform during term time, but at weekends I prefer casual clothes. For example, I often wear jeans and a hoodie because they’re comfortable and easy to move in.

建议: Avoid repetition and tighten the structure: give a direct topic sentence, then one clear reason with a linking word. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "quite a casual person" not "a quite a casual person").

示例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value comfort when I’m out. For example, I usually choose loose trousers and a soft T‑shirt so I can relax and move freely.

建议: Good content and clear contrast. Improve by shortening and polishing language: use one linking word for contrast and replace vague words like "exquisite" with "appropriate for formal events."

示例: Yes, I love wearing T‑shirts, especially in summer, because they’re cool and comfortable. However, for formal events I usually avoid them because they don’t look smart enough.

建议: Clarify the meaning of "doing something more inward" and avoid vague phrasing. Give a brief reason or example of what you prefer doing instead. Keep it to two sentences and use a linking word to explain your reason.

示例: Not really — I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I’m not very picky about my outfits. Instead, I prefer to use my free time for reading or hobbies like drawing.

建议: The answer is repetitive and unclear. Start with a direct statement answering the question, then give a specific contrast between weekday and weekend choices. Remove repeated phrases and add a linking word to connect ideas.

示例: Mostly no — my style stays similar on weekdays and weekends. I usually wear T‑shirts and jeans both during the week and at the weekend because they’re comfortable and practical.

建议: Keep the answer concise and correct grammar ("gives me a sense"). Provide one specific shade or example and explain briefly why you prefer it without extra claims about vision unless you can explain clearly.

示例: I like green, especially olive or forest green, because it gives me a sense of calm and looks natural. For instance, I prefer a green jacket because it feels relaxing and matches many outfits.

× Well at school I just wear my school uniform and on weekends or other holidays I will choose some casual clothing.

✓ Well, at school I just wear my school uniform, and on weekends or other holidays I choose casual clothes.

The use of 'will choose' is unnecessary for habitual actions. Use simple present 'choose' to describe regular habits. Also 'some casual clothing' is awkward; 'casual clothes' is more natural. Add commas for clarity.

× It's because I think I am a quite a casual person and when I go out I just want to relax myself, so I will choose some comfortable clothes.

✓ It's because I think I am quite a casual person, and when I go out I just want to relax, so I choose comfortable clothes.

Remove extra article 'a' before 'quite' and use 'quite a casual person' -> 'quite a casual person' or better 'I am quite a casual person' without the extra 'a'. 'Relax myself' is unnatural; use 'relax'. Replace 'will choose' with simple present 'choose' for habitual action.

× Of course, I really love wearing T-shirts, especially in the summer, because they are cool and very comfortable, but in some special occasions they might seem not very formal or exquisite.

✓ Of course, I really love wearing T-shirts, especially in the summer, because they are cool and very comfortable, but on some special occasions they may seem not very formal or not very elegant.

Use 'on some special occasions' instead of 'in'. 'Might seem not very formal or exquisite' is awkward; 'may seem not very formal or not very elegant' is clearer. 'Exquisite' is unusual for clothing; 'elegant' fits better.

× I really just spend a little time on choosing clothes because I'm not very particular over my clothes and I prefer doing something more inward.

✓ I really just spend a little time choosing clothes because I'm not very particular about my clothes and I prefer doing other things.

Do not use 'on' before gerund 'choosing' here; 'spend time choosing' is correct. Use 'particular about' not 'particular over'. 'Prefer doing something more inward' is unnatural; 'prefer doing other things' or 'prefer other activities' is clearer.

× Well, I usually wear clothes. I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable so I don't always change clothes.

✓ Well, I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable, so I don't often change my clothes.

The first sentence 'I usually wear clothes.' is redundant and unnecessary. Combine into one clear sentence. Use 'don't often change my clothes' rather than 'don't always change clothes' for natural expression; add comma before conjunction.

× Of course, green, because green is my favorite color and it always give me a sense of tranquility and cool and plus it's also very good for my vision.

✓ Of course, green, because green is my favorite color and it always gives me a sense of tranquility and calm, and it's also good for my vision.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it always give' should be 'it always gives' (adds third person -s). 'Cool' as a noun is awkward; use 'calm'. Remove redundant 'plus' and extra 'also' to avoid repetition.