教师— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers (uh, umm), correct word order, and add one specific example of his supportive behaviour. Keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes. My favourite teacher is my international relations lecturer because he is very supportive and respectful. For example, he always gives detailed feedback on essays and meets students after class to discuss their concerns, which helped me improve my writing.

建议: State your position clearly then give two concise reasons using linking words. Remove hesitations and avoid vague phrasing like 'other things.'

示例: No, I don't plan to be a teacher. Teaching is very demanding because teachers must understand student psychology and adapt their methods, and they also need to prepare extensive lesson plans and assessments.

建议: Organise the answer with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and grammar, and include a brief explanation of why you remember her. Avoid unclear quotations; explain the impact on you.

示例: Yes, I still remember a private chemistry tutor from my exam preparation. She once told me that I might not succeed, and that criticism motivated me to study harder, which is why her words stayed with me.

建议: Be precise with vocabulary (e.g. 'in touch with'), correct verb forms, and separate ideas with linking words. Mention frequency and one reason why you keep contact that way.

示例: I'm still in touch with my private English tutor and we talk occasionally. As for my other primary school teachers, I follow them on Facebook and Instagram but I don't contact them regularly because we live in different cities.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail about the support to make it more vivid. Use linking words like 'for example' to show how he helped.

示例: He helped me a lot with my postgraduate applications. For example, he wrote a strong reference letter that helped me secure an offer, and he also reviewed my personal statement and gave detailed advice on interviews.

建议: Give a direct answer then contrast with a brief qualifier. Correct phrasing ('depends on the teacher') and avoid repetition. Add a short specific reason why primary teachers felt kinder.

示例: I prefer primary school teachers because they were generally kinder and made learning fun with games and stories. However, it depends on the teacher; some of my high school teachers were equally supportive and helpful.

× Yes, I do have a favorite teacher, uh, in a uni in my university, uh, my international relations teacher because he is very supportive, kind and respectful.

✓ Yes, I have a favorite teacher at my university: my international relations teacher, because he is very supportive, kind, and respectful.

Use 'at my university' or 'at a university' instead of 'in a uni in my university' for natural preposition and article use; remove redundant 'do' in affirmative statement 'I have'; add commas for list consistency and clarity. Suggestion: say 'at my university' and avoid redundant words.

× He is respectful to everyone no matter how young are we.

✓ He is respectful to everyone no matter how young we are.

In indirect clauses after 'no matter', the subject and verb order should be subject + verb ('we are'), not the question order ('are we'). Suggestion: use 'no matter how + adjective + subject + verb'.

× I don't think so because nowadays, umm, tutoring, uh, and teaching something is very demanding and for teachers, for example, they need to uh, be knowledgeable about uh students, psychology and other things.

✓ I don't think so because nowadays tutoring and teaching are very demanding, and teachers, for example, need to be knowledgeable about students' psychology and other areas.

The main verb must agree with the compound subject 'tutoring and teaching' so use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also use 'students' psychology' (possessive) or 'student psychology' and remove filler words. Ensure parallel structure and clearer noun phrases. Suggestion: keep subjects and verbs in agreement and use possessive for 'students' psychology'.

× I have one teacher that I never for forgot, umm, when I'm preparing my university exams, I have a chemistry private tutor.

✓ I had one teacher I never forgot; when I was preparing for my university exams, I had a private chemistry tutor.

The events are in the past (preparing for exams and having a tutor) so use past tense 'had' and past continuous 'was preparing'. Also correct word order 'private chemistry tutor' and remove extra 'for'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events and correct adjective order.

× Uh, she said me something like, I think you won't be successful.

✓ She said to me something like, 'I think you won't be successful.'

In English, the verb 'say' usually takes a direct object without 'to' for reported speech ('She told me') or uses 'said to me'. Use 'told me' for natural phrasing: 'She told me, "I think you won't be successful."' Suggestion: use 'she told me' or 'she said to me' and place reported speech appropriately.

× I'm still speaking my private English tutor, but for other teachers I follow them through social media, for example Facebook and Instagram, but I don't speak them regularly.

✓ I'm still in contact with my private English tutor, but for other teachers I follow them on social media, for example Facebook and Instagram, and I don't contact them regularly.

Use 'in contact with' instead of 'speaking' and 'follow them on social media' (preposition 'on'). Use 'contact' for 'speak' in this context. Pronoun usage 'them' refers correctly but verbs need adjusting. Suggestion: use 'in contact with' or 'still speak with' and 'follow on social media'.

× Recently, he wrote a reference letter for my postgraduate study UMM which I got an offer from one of them.

✓ Recently, he wrote a reference letter for my postgraduate study; I received an offer from one of the universities.

Use 'received' instead of 'got' for formal context; 'one of them' is vague—specify 'one of the universities'. Also rephrase 'postgraduate study UMM' to clearer form if UMM is a university: 'postgraduate program at UMM'. Suggestion: use past simple 'received' and clearer nouns for formal statements.

× He always supported me throughout the application process.

✓ He always supported me throughout the application process.

If the support occurred in the past and is completed, 'supported' is correct. If you mean ongoing or habitual support, use 'has always supported me'. The original sentence may be acceptable, but consider using present perfect for relevance to present. Suggestion: use 'has always supported me' if the support continues to have present relevance.

× I prefer primary school teachers because they are more kind and and make learning enjoyable.

✓ I prefer primary school teachers because they are kinder and make learning enjoyable.

Use comparative 'kinder' (adjective) instead of 'more kind'. Remove repeated 'and'. Ensure adjective form is correct. Suggestion: use comparative form 'kinder' for short adjectives.

× However, it depends to teacher to teacher so some of my high school teachers are also supportive.

✓ However, it depends on the teacher; some of my high school teachers are also supportive.

Use the preposition 'depends on' not 'depends to'. Also use singular 'the teacher' or phrase 'teacher to teacher' as 'from teacher to teacher' for variation, and add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: say 'depends on the teacher' or 'from teacher to teacher'.