视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct tense and word choice, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Also limit to 3–4 sentences. For example, replace “the strange people” with a clearer description such as “interesting people I met.”

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes and save them on my phone so I can look back on my travels. This reminds me of happy moments and interesting people I met along the way.

建议: Improve fluency and reduce hesitation: give a direct topic sentence, use linking words to justify your preference, correct vocabulary (use “scenes” or “views,” not “reviews”), and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with specific details (e.g., examples of rural scenes you like).

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a busy city and enjoy the contrast of nature. For example, I like photographing green fields, farmhouses, and quiet rivers because they feel peaceful and photogenic.

建议: Give a clearer, balanced answer with specific contrasts and correct vocabulary. Start with a direct statement (both / either), then use linking words like “because” or “however” to explain differences. Avoid trailing off and repetition. Provide one specific example for each type of view.

示例: I like views in both my own country and abroad. In my country I enjoy familiar landscapes and historical sites, while in other countries I appreciate different architecture and cultural scenes, such as colourful markets or coastal towns.

× I took a lot of different views, pictures and I store them in my phone every time I saw them.

✓ I took a lot of different pictures and I stored them on my phone whenever I saw them.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly: 'took' and 'saw' are past, but 'store' is present. Use past tense 'stored' to match. Also 'views, pictures' is redundant; 'pictures' suffices, and use 'on my phone' (preposition) and 'whenever' for repeated past instances.

× I took a lot of different views, pictures and I store them in my phone every time I saw them.

✓ I took a lot of different pictures and I stored them on my phone whenever I saw them.

Use the preposition 'on' with devices ('on my phone') rather than 'in'. Also replace 'every time I saw them' with 'whenever I saw them' for natural expression.

× It will remind me about my travel, the happiness and the strange people.

✓ They remind me of my travels, the happiness and the interesting people I met.

The context refers to what pictures do generally, so present simple 'remind' is appropriate. Use 'remind me of' (correct preposition), plural 'travels' or 'my trip', and 'interesting people' is more natural than 'strange people' unless intended meaning is different.

× I prefer rural areas views.

✓ I prefer rural views.

The phrase 'rural areas views' is ungrammatical. Use 'rural views' or 'views of rural areas'. No article is needed here.

× I live in city so I like nature and agriculture so I I I think I prefer the rural areas reviews.

✓ I live in the city, so I like nature and agriculture; I think I prefer views of rural areas.

Need the definite article 'the' with 'city' when speaking about where you live. Remove repeated 'so' and filler 'I I I'. 'Rural areas reviews' is incorrect; use 'views of rural areas' or 'rural views'. Also adjust punctuation for clarity.

× I live in city so I like nature and agriculture so I I I think I prefer the rural areas reviews.

✓ I live in the city, so I like nature and agriculture; I think I prefer views of rural areas.

'Rural areas reviews' uses 'reviews' (noun) incorrectly as an adjective for views. Replace with 'views of rural areas'. Also remove repeated filler words.

× I think I love the views, both of them.

✓ I think I love the views in both places.

'Both of them' is vague; specify 'both places' (my country and other countries). Use present simple 'love' to express general preference.

× In my country there are many different views I can visit and in the other countries they they have different culture and different.

✓ In my country there are many different places I can visit, and in other countries they have different cultures and customs.

Sentence has repetition ('they they') and incomplete ending ('different.'). 'Different culture' should be plural 'different cultures' and add a parallel noun like 'customs' or 'traditions' to complete the comparison. Also 'the other countries' -> 'other countries' is more natural here.