视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear words like “fantasy” used incorrectly; use “imagination” or “creative side.” Use linking words (for example, because/so/for instance) to make the response coherent. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it stimulates my imagination. For example, I often photograph mountain sunsets and interesting trees because their colors and shapes create an aesthetic mood.

建议: Give a direct, clear answer first (e.g., neither or both) and then explain with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words such as however or on the other hand. Replace vague phrases like “It depends on people” with a concrete explanation. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer both urban and rural views equally because each offers something different. For instance, urban scenes have interesting architecture and lights, while rural areas offer tranquil landscapes and nature, so I choose according to what I want to capture.

建议: State your preference clearly and support it with specific, relevant reasons. Correct grammar and reduce repetition (don’t repeat “depends on people” twice). Use linking phrases such as because, for example, or moreover. Keep the answer to 2–3 concise sentences and use appropriate vocabulary like “scenery,” “landscapes,” or “attractions.”

示例: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a mix of modern architecture and beautiful natural scenery. For example, I can enjoy striking city skylines and nearby mountains and sunsets without traveling far.

× Yes, of course, because like taking pictures of different views, likes helps us to improve our fantasy and I'm a fantasy person so I always take pictures of mountain sunsets and maybe trees that are very aesthetic vibe.

✓ Yes, of course, because taking pictures of different views helps me to improve my imagination, and I'm a creative person so I always take pictures of mountain sunsets and sometimes trees that have a very aesthetic vibe.

Errors: unnecessary 'like' before gerund, incorrect subject 'likes', wrong noun 'fantasy' used instead of 'imagination', pronoun agreement and word choice. Suggestion: Remove extra 'like', use correct verb form 'helps' with singular subject 'taking pictures', use 'me' as the object, replace 'fantasy person' with 'creative person', and use 'sometimes' and 'have' to describe trees' vibe. (Grammar problem type: Verb + -ing form because the gerund phrase and its function were misused.)

× It depends on people because it depends how they are.

✓ It depends on the people because it depends on how they are.

Errors: missing preposition 'on' after 'depends' and unclear reference. Suggestion: Use 'depends on' consistently and include 'the' for specificity: 'depends on the people' and 'depends on how they are.' (Grammar problem type: Subject-verb agreement/errors in verb pattern with 'depend'.)

× Take a photo views in urban area or rural areas.

✓ Whether to take photos in urban areas or rural areas is a personal choice.

Errors: fragment and incorrect word order; 'take a photo views' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Rephrase to a full clause and use plural 'photos' and 'areas' and correct word order. (Grammar problem type: Sentence structure errors because the original is a fragment.)

× So I think 5050.

✓ So I think it's 50-50.

Errors: numeric expression written without context and missing verb. Suggestion: Use 'it's 50-50' to indicate equal preference; spell as '50-50' or 'fifty-fifty.' (Grammar problem type: Incorrect use of quantifiers because the expression of proportion was incorrect.)

× I prefer views in my country because there are lots of modern areas that's which very aesthetic and other places like sunsets places then mountains.

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are lots of modern areas that are very aesthetic, and other places, such as spots for sunsets and mountains, are attractive too.

Errors: wrong relative pronoun and verb agreement ('that's which' incorrect), awkward phrasing 'sunsets places then mountains.' Suggestion: Use 'that are' to connect noun and adjective, and list examples clearly: 'such as spots for sunsets and mountains.' (Grammar problem type: Present tense/relative clause issue.)

× So it depends on people, but I think in my country are better than in other countries because there are a lot of things.

✓ So it depends on people, but I think views in my country are better than those in other countries because there are a lot of attractions.

Errors: missing subject for 'are better' and vague 'things.' Suggestion: Specify the subject 'views' and use 'those' to compare, and replace 'things' with 'attractions' or 'features' for clarity. (Grammar problem type: Incorrect use of pronouns because the comparison lacked a clear pronoun and subject.)