视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more natural and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid minor grammar mistakes, and add one supporting detail with a linking word. Also keep it within 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "photographs" instead of "photo").

示例: Yes, I do. Different views and perspectives make photographs more interesting; for example, I love capturing rooftop lights at night because they create dramatic contrasts, and foggy mountains because they add atmosphere.

建议: Expand slightly to give a reason and a linking word so your answer feels complete. Use a topic sentence then a short explanation with a linking word like "because" or "since." Keep it concise and natural.

示例: I prefer views of urban areas because I enjoy the energy and variety of cityscapes, such as illuminated skyscrapers and busy streets that offer interesting photo opportunities.

建议: Avoid vague phrases like "and so on" and combine short fragments into complete sentences. Provide one specific example and use linking words (e.g., "for example", "also") to make your response more informative and fluent.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many mountains and extensive greenery; for example, I often photograph misty mountain ridges and well-preserved forests, which offer peaceful and scenic compositions.

× Yeah, different views and perspectives can make photo really interesting, just like lights from the rooftop and mountains in the fog, rainy streets.

✓ Yeah, different views and perspectives can make a photo really interesting, just like lights on the rooftop, mountains in the fog, and rainy streets.

The noun 'photo' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct (article error combined with noun usage). Items in a list need parallel prepositions and commas: use 'on the rooftop' not 'from the rooftop' for a viewpoint, and separate items with commas and 'and'. Also add commas to clearly separate list items and ensure adjectives modify nouns correctly (e.g., 'rainy streets'). Suggestion: include the article 'a' before countable singular nouns and maintain parallel structure in lists.

× I prefer views of urban areas.

✓ I prefer views of urban areas.

No correction necessary. Sentence is grammatically correct. It uses plural 'views' and plural 'urban areas' appropriately and does not require an article.

× I prefer views of my own country because it has a lot of mountains. And lots of greenery, clean environment and so on.

✓ I prefer views of my own country because it has a lot of mountains, lots of greenery, and a clean environment.

Combine the short sentence fragment 'And lots of greenery, clean environment and so on.' with the previous sentence for fluency and completeness (avoid sentence fragments). Add the article 'a' before 'clean environment' because 'environment' is a singular countable/abstract noun in this context. Use commas and 'and' for a parallel list. Remove 'and so on' for clarity or replace with a specific phrase. Suggestion: avoid fragments by joining related ideas and ensure articles are used with singular countable nouns.