视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Говорите более естественно и последовательно: избегайте междометий («uh»), исправляйте грамматические ошибки и используйте связки. Начните с чёткой темы, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных уточнения. Например, используйте правильную форму после 'like' (doing) и уберите лишние слова.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially nature scenes, because they are very beautiful. I often feel excited after a shoot, and I like to capture details like light and color to remember the place.

建议: Сосредоточьтесь на прямом ответе и давайте конкретные причины. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок (use 'have not seen', 'these areas', 'make us enthusiastic'). Используйте связки: 'because', 'for example', 'so'. Дайте максимум две поддерживающие детали.

示例: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and unique scenery that many people may not have seen. For example, I enjoy photographing old villages and fields, which often show interesting textures and colors.

建议: Отвечайте ясно и кратко: исправьте порядок слов и времена ('I have never been to other countries'). Дайте конкретные причины и примеры, избегайте двусмысленности ('memorizable' лучше заменить на 'memorable'). Используйте связки: 'because', 'also', 'for example'.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I have never been abroad and I love our historical and picturesque sites. For example, ancient towns and natural parks here feel magical and are very memorable for visitors.

× I really enjoy this kind of, uh, activities.

✓ I really enjoy these kinds of activities.

The phrase 'this kind of activities' mixes singular 'this kind of' with plural 'activities'. Use 'these kinds of activities' or 'this kind of activity'. Use plural demonstrative 'these' with 'kinds' when referring to multiple activities.

× I like to taking pictures of nature because it's so gorgeous.

✓ I like taking pictures of nature because it's so gorgeous.

After 'like', use either the infinitive 'to take' or the gerund 'taking', not 'to taking'. Use 'I like taking' for general preference.

× many people don't have seen this kind of areas

✓ many people haven't seen these kinds of areas

'Have seen' with negative should be 'haven't seen'. Also 'this kind of areas' is incorrect for plural; use 'these kinds of areas'. Ensure subject-verb agreement with plural forms.

× pictures of that kind of places makes me and our people more, uh, enthusiastic to see this kind of places.

✓ pictures of those kinds of places make me and our people more enthusiastic to see those places.

Subject 'pictures' is plural so verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also use 'those kinds of places' or 'those places' for plural; avoid repeating 'kind of places'—use 'places' or 'kinds of places' consistently.

× And it will be.

✓ And it will be memorable.

'And it will be.' is incomplete and vague. Add an adjective like 'memorable' to complete the idea: 'And it will be memorable.'

× I I never have been in other countries

✓ I have never been to other countries

Use present perfect 'have never been' and the preposition 'to' with 'been' for places: 'been to other countries'. Also remove repeated 'I'.

× I mostly like my country areas because it's historical and magical and other people will also like it and will be memorizable.

✓ I mainly like the areas of my country because they are historical and magical, and other people will also like them and find them memorable.

Use 'mainly' instead of 'mostly' for preference clarity; 'my country areas' -> 'the areas of my country'; refer to plural 'areas' with 'they are' not 'it's'. 'Memorizable' is awkward; use 'memorable' and say 'find them memorable'. Ensure pronouns agree in number.