视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and add brief supporting detail. Avoid replying with just a polite phrase. Use 1–3 sentences, include a reason or an example, and keep language natural.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like capturing sunsets because the changing colors create dramatic scenes, and I often share the best shots with friends.

建议: Start with a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific supporting details or an example. Use linking words (for example, because, and) and avoid repetition and hesitations. Keep it under five sentences and correct small grammar issues (plural/singular, articles).

示例: I prefer urban views, especially big city skylines, because I enjoy the dramatic shapes and lights. For example, last week I visited Tokyo and went up a tower to see the whole city, which had an amazing panoramic view.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (because, for example, so) and avoid repetition. Fix grammar: plural forms, articles, and word order (e.g., “other countries,” “views abroad,” “more unusual than my own country”). Keep answers concise (2–3 sentences).

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes and architectures that are different from Taiwan. For example, I have visited Australia and Japan and enjoyed seeing unique coastal scenery and modern cityscapes that I don't usually see at home.

× For me, I prefer the views of urban area, especially the big city.

✓ For me, I prefer the views of urban areas, especially big cities.

The original uses 'the views of urban area' which is ungrammatical because 'area' is singular while the meaning is general; plural 'urban areas' or 'an urban area' is required. Also 'the big city' is too specific; 'big cities' matches the plural general preference. Suggestion: use plural to express general preference ('urban areas', 'big cities').

× I really like the skylines of the cities and I really love to go to the tower that you can see the whole views of the cities.

✓ I really like city skylines and I love going to towers where you can see the whole view of the city.

Several issues: repetition 'really' is stylistic but acceptable; 'the skylines of the cities' is wordy—'city skylines' is natural. 'Love to go to the tower that you can see' is ungrammatical; use gerund 'love going' and relative clause 'where you can see'. 'Whole views of the cities' should be singular 'the whole view of the city' or plural consistently; here use singular 'the whole view of the city' to refer to the panorama. Suggestion: simplify phrases and use consistent singular/plural and correct relative clauses ('towers where you can see').

× For example, last week I went to Japan and I went to Tokyo. I we, I went.

✓ For example, last week I went to Japan; I went to Tokyo.

The original contains repetitions and an incomplete fragment 'I we, I went.' This is a sentence structure and fluency problem. Remove repetition and the fragment, and join related ideas with a semicolon or conjunction. Suggestion: speak in concise complete sentences: 'I went to Japan; I went to Tokyo.'

× To be honest, I prefer the views in other country.

✓ To be honest, I prefer the views in other countries.

'Other country' is singular and lacks an article; when speaking generally about countries other than one's own, use the plural 'other countries.' Suggestion: use plural for general comparison ('other countries').

× I have been to several countries such as Australia and Japan and I really like the view of abroad because it is more unusual as my own country, Taiwan, and I really enjoy to see different kind of kind of views.

✓ I have been to several countries such as Australia and Japan, and I really like views abroad because they are more unusual than those in my own country, Taiwan, and I really enjoy seeing different kinds of views.

Multiple problems corrected but all match listed types: 'view of abroad' is incorrect preposition/word choice — use 'views abroad'. 'It is more unusual as my own country' has incorrect comparison and pronoun reference; use 'they are more unusual than those in my own country'. 'I really enjoy to see' should be 'I really enjoy seeing' (verb + -ing). 'Different kind of kind of views' has repetition and needs plural 'different kinds of views'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('abroad'), comparative structure ('more... than'), gerund after 'enjoy' ('enjoy seeing'), and plural forms for 'kinds' and 'views'.