视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and prepositions, avoid redundancy, and keep to under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. For example, when I feel relaxed I enjoy photographing landscapes and distant scenes because they help me unwind and preserve memories. Also, I sometimes take portraits of friends when I want to capture a moment.

建议: Answer directly then give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct nouns and collocations (e.g., "beautiful scenery", "city centre", "nature") and fix verb forms. Limit to 2–4 concise sentences.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy photographing beautiful scenery. Since I live in the city centre, I rarely see natural landscapes, so visiting the countryside provides a refreshing change and better photo opportunities.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and explain specific reasons. Use comparative phrasing correctly ("prefer X to Y") and include one concrete example of what you want to see abroad. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

示例: I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because I already know many local places. For instance, I would like to photograph coastal villages or mountain ranges abroad to gain new experiences and different cultural memories.

× Is it depend on my mood?

✓ Does it depend on my mood?

The sentence is a yes/no question in the present simple. English requires the auxiliary 'do/does' for questions: with third-person singular subject 'it' use 'does'. Also the verb should be base form 'depend'. Use 'Does it depend on my mood?' for correct grammar.

× Sometime I love to taking photo or portrait but I think I might be like taking further off different wheels because it made me feel relaxing and it good to keep memories in that time.

✓ Sometimes I love taking photos or portraits, but I think I prefer taking wider shots of different scenes because it makes me feel relaxed and it is good for keeping memories.

Multiple issues: 'Sometime' should be plural/adverb 'Sometimes' (time expression). 'to taking' is incorrect — after 'love' we use the gerund 'taking' without 'to'. 'photo or portrait' should be plural 'photos or portraits' for general actions. 'I might be like' is incorrect; 'I prefer' expresses preference. 'further off different wheels' is unclear; likely 'wider shots of different scenes'. 'made me feel relaxing' should be 'makes me feel relaxed' (present tense and adjective 'relaxed'). 'it good to keep memories in that time' should be 'it is good for keeping memories' and omit 'in that time'. Use consistent present tense when speaking about habitual preferences.

× I prefer view in rural areas because I love photographing a beauty scenery and I live in the center of city so I can't find the natural and I think it is a good experience to taking a picture of the nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love photographing beautiful scenery, and I live in the city center so I can't find nature here; I think it is a good experience to take pictures of nature.

Use plural 'views' for general preference. 'Photographing a beauty scenery' is wrong: use adjective 'beautiful' and uncountable 'scenery' without 'a'. 'The center of city' should be 'the city center' or 'the center of the city' (article placement). 'I can't find the natural' is wrong; use 'I can't find nature here' or 'natural areas'. 'to taking a picture' should be 'to take pictures' (infinitive + plural or gerund consistently). Also improved punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× I prefer view in other countries because I find many views in my country so I want to get new experience in another country to keep another memories for me.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have seen many views in my country, so I want to get new experiences in another country to make more memories.

Change 'view' to plural 'views'. 'I find many views in my country' is awkward; 'I have seen many views in my country' fits better. 'New experience' should be plural 'new experiences' when general. 'To keep another memories for me' is ungrammatical: use 'to make more memories' or 'to create other memories'. Adjust word order and articles for clarity and naturalness.