视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is brief and direct, which is good, but it lacks development. Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (why you like it, what kinds of views you prefer or a typical situation). Use one linking word if you add more than one idea. Keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset because the light makes buildings look dramatic, and I find composing those shots relaxing.

建议: Your answer states a preference but contains grammatical errors and repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason using correct grammar and a linking word (e.g., because, since). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

示例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architectural variety of cities. For instance, I like photographing busy streets and modern buildings since they offer interesting shapes and vibrant nighttime lighting.

建议: The answer shows preference but has several language mistakes and vague wording. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example. Use correct articles and grammar (e.g., "a country", "the view at night") and avoid saying "I'm not a natural person" — instead explain you prefer urban/night scenes.

示例: I prefer views in other countries, such as Japan, because I love their cityscapes at night. For example, Tokyo's neon streets and illuminated towers create a distinctive atmosphere that I enjoy photographing.

× I prefer view in urban areas because I think rural area is not for me because I'm not someone who love nature.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I think rural areas are not for me because I'm not someone who loves nature.

The sentence has multiple singular/plural mismatches: 'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'urban areas'; 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match context; and 'who love nature' has a subject-verb agreement error related to number (see ID 27) so 'love' should be 'loves' for 'someone'. Use plural nouns when referring to areas in general and use third-person singular verb form with 'someone'. Suggested improvement: make nouns and verbs agree in number and keep parallel structure: 'views', 'rural areas', 'someone who loves'.

× I prefer view in other country such as Japan. I like it view during night because it because I'm not a natural person.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, such as Japan. I like the view at night, but I'm not a natural person.

This sentence contains several article and noun number errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally; 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country' depending on intent; missing comma before 'such as' and 'the view' requires the definite article when referring to a specific scene; 'during night' is incorrect — use 'at night'. Also the phrase 'because it because' is redundant and unclear; replace with a contrast or conjunction 'but'. Finally, 'a natural person' is awkward; likely 'not a nature person' or 'not someone who loves nature' would be better. Suggested improvement: use correct articles ('the'), correct prepositions for time ('at night'), and ensure noun number agreement.