视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Focus on natural phrasing, correct grammar, and concise structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms, articles, and word order (e.g., 'I love taking pictures of different views'). Avoid redundancy and capitalisation errors.

示例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, my friends call me 'Huntographer' because I enjoy combining my name with 'photographer', and having studied art helps me find good angles. Therefore I feel confident when I take photos of landscapes or cityscapes.

建议: Answer directly with a clear preference, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'I prefer rural areas to urban areas' and 'I enjoy taking pictures of nature'). Keep to two or three sentences to be concise.

示例: I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I enjoy taking pictures of nature. The countryside is very beautiful and peaceful, so I feel more relaxed and can focus on composing my shots.

建议: State your preference clearly, then give specific examples and explain why with correct grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' and correct noun phrases (e.g., 'my country has traditions everywhere, such as palaces like Gyeongbokgung and Gwanghwamun'). Avoid vague endings.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because it is rich in traditions and historic sites. For example, places like Gyeongbokgung Palace and Gwanghwamun offer unique architecture and cultural atmosphere that I find more meaningful to photograph.

× Yeah, I love Take a Picture, all different views.

✓ Yeah, I love taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' not the base form 'Take'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. Capitalization of 'Take a Picture' is unnecessary. Use 'taking pictures of different views' for natural present habit description.

× So actually my nickname is Huntographer is mixed my name and photographer.

✓ Actually, my nickname is Huntographer; it is a mix of my name and 'photographer'.

The original has two verbs without proper connection. Use a semicolon or conjunction and the verb 'is' only once. 'Is mixed my name and photographer' is ungrammatical; use 'it is a mix of my name and photographer'. Enclose 'photographer' as the word being combined. Include a comma after 'Actually' for clarity.

× So I think I'm good at Take a picture because I studied art, so I know the what is a good angle when I take a picture.

✓ So I think I'm good at taking pictures because I studied art, so I know what is a good angle when I take a picture.

Use the gerund 'taking' after 'good at'. Remove the extra 'the' before 'what'. 'Picture' should be plural in the first clause ('taking pictures') because it's a general activity; in the second clause 'a picture' is acceptable when referring to a single shot.

× Actually I think I prefer a rural area than urban area because I enjoying take up picture to nature because it is very beautiful and I feel comfortable and I think.

✓ Actually, I think I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I enjoy taking pictures of nature; it is very beautiful and makes me feel comfortable.

Use 'prefer A to B' structure, so 'prefer rural areas to urban areas'. Use plural 'areas' for general preference. 'I enjoying take up picture to nature' is incorrect: 'enjoy' + gerund -> 'enjoy taking pictures of nature'. 'Take up' is unnecessary. Combine ideas into clear clauses and remove the trailing 'and I think' which is incomplete.

× I prefer views in my country because my country have tradition everywhere since such as palace which is Kangbuk gong and Gwanghwamun.

✓ I prefer views in my country because my country has traditions everywhere, such as palaces like Gyeongbokgung and Gwanghwamun.

Use 'has' for subject-verb agreement with singular 'my country'. 'Tradition everywhere since' is incorrect; use 'traditions everywhere' and give examples with 'such as'. 'Palace which is Kangbuk gong' is incorrect name and structure: correct palace name is 'Gyeongbokgung' and use 'like' or 'such as'. Also pluralize 'palaces' when giving multiple examples.

× I think it's really prefer.

✓ I really like it.

'It's really prefer' is ungrammatical: 'prefer' is a verb that needs an object or 'preferable' as an adjective. The intended meaning is 'I really like it' or 'I prefer it', so use 'I really like it' for clarity.