视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, giảm ngập ngừng và lặp từ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (Yes/No + lý do), sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích và khi nào bạn chụp). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., café interior, library shelves, natural landscape) và liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc. Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing atmosphere. For example, I often photograph cozy café interiors and rows of books in libraries. I also take pictures of natural landscapes when I go hiking because the light and colours are beautiful.

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác; tránh ngập ngừng và những cụm không rõ nghĩa (ví dụ “realize”). Trả lời với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ ngắn. Sử dụng liên từ như “because” hoặc “for example” để kết nối ý.

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For example, I like photographing busy streets, colourful murals and modern buildings since they create interesting contrasts and patterns.

建议: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (s/are, it makes) và tránh lặp từ. Nên đưa ra so sánh rõ ràng: nêu lý do tại sao thích trong nước, sau đó nhấn mạnh điều hấp dẫn ở nước ngoài bằng một câu phụ. Dùng từ ngữ cụ thể để miêu tả cảm xúc và trải nghiệm mới mẻ.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because they make me feel relaxed and nostalgic, such as familiar beaches and countryside I visited as a child. However, I also enjoy views abroad because they offer new architecture and cultures that spark my curiosity.

× Yeah, I like taking pictures of different views. Uh, maybe it's like coffee, uh, the book on the library and umm, sometime, uh, view of nature.

✓ Yeah, I like taking pictures of different views. For example, coffee shops, books in the library, and sometimes views of nature.

The original used 'it's like' incorrectly and had noun phrase errors. Replace 'it's like' with 'for example' to introduce examples. Use plural nouns 'coffee shops' and 'books' and 'views' for natural reference. 'on the library' is incorrect preposition; use 'in the library'. Also 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I prefer views in urban areas because it makes me feel happy, realize and comfortable. Umm, maybe. I very like it.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they make me feel happy, relaxed, and comfortable. I really like them.

'It makes' is incorrect because the subject 'views' is plural; change to 'they make' for subject-verb agreement. 'realize' is the wrong word; use 'relaxed'. 'I very like it' is ungrammatical in English; use 'I really like them' with correct adverb placement and plural pronoun referring to 'views'.

× I prefer views in my own countries because it's make me feel happy, feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they make me feel happy, relaxed, and comfortable.

'My own countries' is incorrect if referring to a single country; use 'my own country' or 'my countries' if multiple. Also 'it's make' mixes singular subject 'it' with plural verb 'make'; use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'views' and 'make'. Combine 'feel relaxed and comfortable' more naturally as 'relaxed and comfortable'.

× However, in other countries, uh, it's make me feel like, make me feel interested and because it's new.

✓ However, in other countries, they make me feel interested because they are new to me.

Again 'it's make' is incorrect for plural 'views'; use 'they make'. 'Make me feel like' is incomplete; use 'make me feel interested' or 'they interest me'. 'Because it's new' should match plural subject: 'because they are new to me'. This fixes subject-verb agreement and clarifies meaning.