视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid word repetition and incorrect forms (e.g., “taking picture” → “taking pictures”). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “landscapes,” “buildings,” “nature”).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph cityscapes and natural landscapes because I like capturing interesting architecture and peaceful scenes, which help me remember places I visit.

建议: Organize your answer: state preference, give clear reasons, and use linking words. Use accurate vocabulary—’urban’ vs ‘rural’, ‘architecture’, ‘green spaces’. Avoid contradictory or confusing statements (e.g., cities are not mountains). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy architecture and the lively street scenes. For instance, I like photographing historic buildings and bustling markets, which give more visual variety than rural landscapes.

建议: Answer directly: state your preference and explain with a specific reason and an example. Use clearer vocabulary such as “familiar,” “cultural landmarks,” or “local scenery.” Avoid vague or repetitive phrases like “tell about.” Limit to 2–3 well-formed sentences.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and their cultural significance. For example, I enjoy photographing local festivals and historic neighborhoods that I can describe and understand in detail.

× Yes, I am taking picture of different viewers and especially I love to taking pictures of the things what I am seeing in front of me like bars, naturalistic things and everything of what is looking very nice.

✓ Yes, I take pictures of different views, and especially I love taking pictures of the things I see in front of me, like bars, natural scenery, and anything that looks nice.

The student used incorrect progressive form and verb patterns. 'I am taking picture' is wrong because 'take pictures' is a habitual action, so simple present 'I take pictures' is appropriate. 'I love to taking pictures' mixes infinitive and -ing; the correct form is either 'I love taking pictures' or 'I love to take pictures.' Also 'the things what I am seeing' is unnatural: use 'the things I see.' Replace 'naturalistic things' with 'natural scenery' and 'viewers' with 'views.' Improve fluency by using parallel structure and correct verb forms. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits (I take), use gerund after 'love' (love taking), and use relative clause without 'what' (things I see).

× Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. Preposition 'in' correctly indicates location. Included here to confirm it meets the list and requires no correction.

× Honestly, I like to prefer urban areas because urban people and urban naturistic things are more reliable and more relaxing.

✓ Honestly, I prefer urban areas because the people and natural features there are more familiar and relaxing to me.

'I like to prefer' is redundant; use 'I prefer.' 'Urban naturistic things' is incorrect: 'natural' refers to nature, but 'urban' and 'natural' conflict; likely the student means 'natural features' or 'scenery near the city' or 'urban attractions.' 'More reliable' is inappropriate for describing people or places; 'familiar' or 'comfortable' fits better. Adjust word choice and remove repetition for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' alone, choose appropriate adjectives ('familiar', 'relaxing'), and avoid contradictory combinations like 'urban natural.'

× And it looks very interesting to see because urban areas are like mountains.

✓ That sounds odd because urban areas are not like mountains; if you mean the scenery, say 'Some cities have hilly or mountainous areas that are interesting to see.'

The original sentence is illogical and confusing: 'urban areas are like mountains' is usually false. This is a sentence-meaning/structure error. Provide a clearer alternative that fits possible intended meaning. Ensure the sentence matches reality and maintains logical structure. Suggestion: Clarify whether you mean 'some cities have hills or mountains' and restructure the sentence accordingly.

× There are have mount, there are there are too many mountains and.

✓ Some places have mountains; there are many mountains.

This sentence includes redundant and incorrect auxiliary verbs: 'There are have' is ungrammatical, and the repeated 'there are there are' is redundant. Remove incorrect verbs and repetitions, use the standard existential construction 'There are many mountains' or 'Some places have mountains.' Suggestion: Use 'There are' + plural noun for existence (There are many mountains) or 'Some places have' + noun (Some places have mountains).

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This question is correct as written and uses appropriate present simple tense for preferences. Included to confirm no correction is needed.

× In my opinion, I like to tell about my country because it is very reliable to stay in home country and tell about the naturistic thing of my own country's cities, and it is too much good to live in my own country and tell told everything about my country.

✓ In my opinion, I like to talk about my country because it feels safer to stay in my home country and to describe its natural attractions; I also enjoy living here and telling others about my country.

Multiple preposition and verb-choice errors: 'tell about' should be 'talk about' or 'describe'; 'it is very reliable to stay in home country' is incorrect and ambiguous—use 'it feels safer to stay in my home country.' 'Naturistic thing' is wrong; use 'natural attractions' or 'natural features.' 'It is too much good' is ungrammatical; use 'I also enjoy' or 'it is very good.' 'Tell told everything' mixes tenses and forms; use 'telling others about my country.' Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs ('talk about', 'describe'), correct prepositions ('in my home country'), and maintain consistent tense and idiom ('I enjoy living here').