视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and fluent: remove repetitions, use correct verb forms and articles, and finish the idea coherently. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a reason. Use linking words like “because” or “so” and avoid stopping mid-sentence.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I especially like photographing cityscapes because the architecture and lights are visually striking, and I often share my photos on Instagram to document my trips.

建议: Improve sentence structure and clarity: use correct comparative form (“prefer X to Y”), include a clear reason with a linking word, and provide one specific example to support your preference. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer urban views to rural ones because cities have iconic landmarks and interesting skyscrapers. For instance, I enjoy photographing the skyline at sunset when the glass towers reflect warm colors.

建议: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences: use the correct comparative phrase (“prefer views in other countries to those in my own country”), give a clear reason and a concrete example, and finish the thought. Use cohesive devices like “because” and “for example.”

示例: To be honest, I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because I find foreign landscapes and historic sites more varied and dramatic. For example, I loved photographing the colorful streets and ancient architecture when I visited Spain.

× Yes, I enjoy enjoy taking picture of different views.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'enjoy' was repeated (duplication) and 'picture' should be plural after 'taking' when referring to various views. This matches 'Verb + -ing form' (8) for the gerund usage and 'Singular and plural issue' (1). Use a single 'enjoy' and plural 'pictures' because you mean multiple photos.

× For example, I love taking pictures of city views because I when I take a picture I I can download it on Instagram or my.

✓ For example, I love taking pictures of city views because when I take a picture I can download it to Instagram or my account.

Errors include word duplication ('I I'), misplaced word 'because I when', and an incomplete phrase 'or my'. These are sentence structure errors (26) and pronoun/article issues (12,22). Correct the clause order: 'because when I take a picture I can download it to Instagram or my account.' Also use 'download to' and specify 'my account'.

× I like urban areas than rural areas because in urban areas have many iconic symbols and many different skyscrapers.

✓ I prefer urban areas to rural areas because urban areas have many iconic landmarks and many different skyscrapers.

The comparative structure should be 'prefer A to B' (comparison structure, treated as sentence structure 26 and preposition 11). Also 'in urban areas have' is incorrect word order — subject 'urban areas' is needed before the verb 'have'. Replace 'iconic symbols' with 'iconic landmarks' for natural collocation.

× To be honest, I I would rather other countries views than my my country because in another country have in another country have many different breathtaking things and.

✓ To be honest, I would rather see views in other countries than in my country because other countries have many different breathtaking sights.

This sentence has duplicated words ('I I', 'my my'), incorrect comparative structure ('would rather other countries views than my country'), and incorrect word order ('in another country have'). These are sentence structure errors (26), verb/word duplication (8), and singular/plural or article issues (1,22). Use 'would rather see views in other countries than in my country' and 'other countries have many ... sights' to fix grammar and clarity.