视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific reasons with logical linking words. Avoid repetition and irrelevant phrases (e.g. “congratulate our school” is unclear). Focus on concrete details such as when you take photos, what you enjoy photographing, and who inspired you.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, my mother used to take me to parks and old streets when I was a child, and I still like photographing architectural details and landscapes because they remind me of those memories.

建议: Give a direct preference then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid filler words and unclear statements like “I think every year.” Explain what elements of urban views you like (architecture, lights, activity) and contrast briefly with rural views if helpful.

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and lively street scenes. For instance, I like photographing tall buildings, colorful shopfronts and busy markets, which offer more variety than quiet rural landscapes.

建议: State your preference clearly and give specific examples and reasons, using linking words for coherence. Avoid vague phrases like “I live every day and see it.” Instead say you’re used to familiar scenes at home and enjoy the novelty of international landmarks, naming one or two examples correctly and briefly explaining why they interest you.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new sights and cultural differences. For example, I loved seeing Big Ben in London and modern skyscrapers in Dubai, which provided different architectural styles and photo opportunities compared with my hometown.

× Yes, I like I like taking picture of different views because I congratulate our school this year and I really like drawing for my childhood.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I celebrated our school event this year, and I have liked drawing since my childhood.

Errors: repetition ('I like I like') and singular/plural ('taking picture' should be 'taking pictures'), incorrect verb choice ('congratulate our school' seems wrong in context; likely 'celebrated our school event'), and tense/phrase for lifelong habit ('I really like drawing for my childhood' -> 'I have liked drawing since my childhood'). Suggestions: remove duplicate words, use plural for countable nouns, choose verbs that match the intended meaning, and use 'have liked... since' to express a preference continuing from childhood. Grammar problem type ID:26

× My mom, my mom always take me a different picture and I draw it.

✓ My mom always takes different pictures of me, and I draw them.

Errors: repetition ('My mom, my mom'), subject-verb agreement ('my mom ... take' should be 'takes'), article and object structure ('take me a different picture' is incorrect — 'take pictures of me'), and pronoun-number agreement ('I draw it' -> 'I draw them' to match plural 'pictures'). Suggestions: remove repeated phrase, use correct verb form for third person singular, and ensure pronouns match the number of the noun they refer to. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I, I prefer urban areas because it's, I think it's look like more modern than rural areas and I love it.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I think they look more modern than rural areas, and I love them.

Errors: repetition ('I, I'), incorrect subject reference ('it's' referring to plural 'areas' should be 'they'), incorrect verb form ('it's look like' -> 'they look' or 'they seem'), and unnecessary filler. Suggestions: remove repeated words, match pronoun number to noun, use correct verb form for present tense comparisons, and avoid filler words. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I think every year.

✓ I think so every year.

Error: fragment and unclear placement — 'I think every year' is incomplete. If the student means the preference is repeated annually, better: 'I think so every year' or 'I've felt this way every year.' Suggestions: use a complete clause that clearly states frequency and maintain consistent tense. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer views in other countries because in my country I live every day and see it and another countries I can see new views like F Tower, Big Ben or another destination.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I see my own country every day, but in other countries I can see new sights like the Eiffel Tower, Big Ben, or other destinations.

Errors: article use ('F Tower' should be 'the Eiffel Tower'), singular/plural and pronoun reference ('see it' should be 'see it every day' or 'see my country every day'), incorrect preposition/phrase ('and another countries' -> 'but in other countries'), and word choice ('views' -> 'sights' or 'landmarks'). Suggestions: use correct articles with famous landmarks ('the Eiffel Tower'), use contrasting conjunctions correctly ('but' to contrast familiar vs new), and choose appropriate nouns for tourist attractions. Grammar problem type ID:11