视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and reduce hesitation. Keep answers natural and concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Add one specific detail about what you photograph and why, using a linking word to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain landscapes because I like how light changes the scene. I usually try different angles to capture interesting shapes and textures.

建议: Do not ask for definitions; instead show understanding or ask a quick clarification if necessary. Give a direct preference in one sentence, then one brief reason with a linking word. Use simple vocabulary correctly and avoid asking basic questions back to the examiner.

示例: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of natural details. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields and rivers since they offer calm atmospheres and rich colors.

建议: Provide a clear answer (either one preference or say both) and then give specific, connected reasons. Reduce fillers like 'uh' and avoid vague phrases such as 'both sides of ways.' Use linking words (for example, however, because) and one concrete example to support your statement.

示例: I like views in both my country and other countries because each place offers unique scenery. For example, at home I photograph traditional villages for their textures, while abroad I enjoy coastal cities for their dramatic light and architecture.

× Yes, I like to taking picture of different views from different angles.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views from different angles.

The verb 'like' can be followed by a gerund (verb+ing) or an infinitive, but 'to taking' is incorrect because it mixes the infinitive marker 'to' with a gerund. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. Suggestion: use 'like taking pictures' or 'like to take pictures'.

× What is urban areas and rural areas?

✓ What are urban areas and rural areas?

This sentence asks about two plural nouns, so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of 'is'. The error is incorrect subject-verb agreement with pronoun/subject. Suggestion: use 'What are...' when asking about plural subjects.

× Yes, I like both sides of ways. I like uh, my country's views also and other countries views, uh, different types of views I saw.

✓ Yes, I like both. I like my country's views and the views of other countries; I have seen different types of views.

Multiple issues: 'both sides of ways' is unnatural — use 'both' or 'both kinds' (not a listed type) so corrected to 'both'. 'Other countries views' needs possessive or 'the views of other countries'. The clause 'different types of views I saw' is awkward in word order and tense; better 'I have seen different types of views' to indicate experience. Errors corrected here fall under verb+ -ing form and incorrect use of pronouns/possessives and sentence structure. Suggestion: simplify to 'I like my country's views and the views of other countries; I have seen different kinds of views.'