视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise, correct minor grammar, and add a linking word for coherence. Keep answers under five sentences and provide a brief example or reason. Also use plural or articles correctly (e.g., "peaceful moments" or "a peaceful moment").

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing natural scenery like trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moments. Additionally, I like street photography because it lets me take creative shots of shadows and everyday life.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence, use a linking word to show reason, and fix collocation/word choice (e.g., "go for long walks" not "long work"). Be specific about activities and keep it concise.

示例: I prefer rural areas because the trees and rivers help me relax. For example, I often go for long walks or sit by the water to read, and being alone means I can focus without interruptions.

建议: Provide a clearer, more cohesive response: begin with a direct answer, then give a concise example with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "some more famous landscapes" and replace with simpler, accurate wording. Use consistent tense and pluralization ("peaceful moments").

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer new and quieter landscapes. For example, in Australia I found peaceful coastal areas that were less crowded, whereas popular spots in Taiwan were often overcrowded and noisy.

× I love catching natural scenery such as trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moment.

✓ I love catching natural scenery such as trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moments.

The noun 'moment' here refers to countable instances; English requires the plural 'moments' or a determiner like 'a'. Using the plural 'moments' correctly matches the general meaning of saving multiple peaceful experiences. Suggestion: use 'moments' or 'a peaceful moment' depending on intended meaning.

× I also enjoy photographing in the street.

✓ I also enjoy photographing on the street.

The correct preposition with 'the street' for general street photography is 'on'. 'In the street' can be used but often implies being physically within the street; 'on the street' is more natural for activities happening along streets. This is primarily a preposition choice (see next), but the main correction is 'on the street' for natural phrasing.

× It allows me to take some more creative shots of my shadow when I am out in the city.

✓ It allows me to take some more creative shots of my shadow when I am out in the city.

No correction needed. The original sentence is grammatical. Include only if matching allowed list; here it is reported as correct so no change.

× I prefer views in remote areas because scenery such as trees and rivers helps me relax.

✓ I prefer views in remote areas because scenery such as trees and rivers helps me relax.

No correction needed. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and 'helps' agrees with it. The sentence is grammatical.

× I also enjoy being there alone since nobody bothers me and I can go for long work or read by the water without distractions.

✓ I also enjoy being there alone since nobody bothers me and I can work for long periods or read by the water without distractions.

'Go for long work' is ungrammatical. Use 'work for long periods' or 'work for a long time' to express duration. 'Work' as a verb needs an appropriate time expression; 'for long periods' is natural.

× For instance, in Australia, even though there are some more famous landscapes that many tourists know, I can still enjoy the peaceful moment.

✓ For instance, in Australia, even though there are some more famous landscapes that many tourists know, I can still enjoy peaceful moments.

Same article/number issue as before: 'peaceful moment' should be plural or have an article. Also tense is consistent (present) so keep present 'can still enjoy'. Suggest using 'peaceful moments'.

× However, that didn't happen when I was in Taiwan, which was overcrowded everywhere.

✓ However, that didn't happen when I was in Taiwan, which was overcrowded everywhere.

No change needed for tense; the sentence is grammatical. 'Didn’t happen' correctly uses past tense to refer to the visit to Taiwan. 'Which was overcrowded everywhere' is acceptable descriptive clause.