视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Good content and fluency. Improve grammatical accuracy (use plural/singular, articles), tighten phrasing, and add a linking word to connect ideas. Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

示例: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing natural scenery like trees, rivers and sunsets because they help me preserve peaceful moments. Additionally, I like street photography, as it lets me experiment with creative shots—for example, capturing interesting shadows or reflections when I’m out in the city.

建议: Strong and relevant answer with clear reasons. To improve, add a brief linking phrase and one specific detail or example to make your response more vivid and specific. Watch small grammar points (use 'unobstructed' or 'no one' instead of 'nobody' in formal speech).

示例: I prefer rural views, mainly remote areas, because natural scenery like trees and rivers helps me relax. For instance, when I visit a quiet lakeside I can take long walks and read by the water without distractions, which makes the experience much more restorative.

建议: Answer has good opinion but some problems with clarity, cohesion and tone. Avoid vague or absolute statements ("overcrowded everywhere") and grammatical errors (tense and pronoun use). Use a linking word to contrast and provide a concise specific example of a peaceful place abroad. Keep sentences natural and avoid overgeneralization.

示例: I generally prefer views in other countries because I often find quieter, more expansive landscapes. For example, in Australia I enjoyed a peaceful coastal reserve where I could walk alone and photograph wide, empty beaches—whereas in my visit to Taiwan many popular spots were crowded, so they felt less tranquil.

× I love capturing natural scenery such as trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moment.

✓ I love capturing natural scenery such as trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moments.

The noun 'moment' here is countable and used in a general sense, so it needs a plural form or an article. Using the plural 'moments' correctly matches the general idea of preserving multiple peaceful experiences. Suggestion: use 'moments' when speaking about repeated or general experiences.

× I also enjoy photographing on the street.

✓ I also enjoy photographing in the street.

The preposition 'in' is more natural with 'the street' when referring to being among buildings and people; 'on the street' can imply the surface or homelessness. Use 'in the street' or 'on the streets' depending on context. Suggestion: use 'in the street' for being in urban street scenes or 'on the streets' for street photography broadly.

× It allows me to take some more creative shots of my shadow when I am out in the city.

✓ It allows me to take some more creative shots of my shadow when I am out in the city.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. (Included to show no article error.)

× I prefer views in remote areas because scenery such as trees and rivers helps me relax.

✓ I prefer views in remote areas because scenery such as trees and rivers helps me relax.

No correction needed; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun used correctly. (Included to indicate checked sentence.)

× I also enjoy being there alone since nobody bothers me and I can go for long walks or read by the water without distractions.

✓ I also enjoy being there alone since nobody bothers me and I can go for long walks or read by the water without distractions.

No correction needed; pronouns are used correctly. (Included to indicate checked sentence.)

× I prefer views in other countries, for instance in Australia, even though there are some well known landscapes, like many tourists know, I can still enjoy the peaceful moment.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, for instance in Australia. Even though there are some well-known landscapes, as many tourists know, I can still enjoy the peaceful moments.

Problems: sentence run-on and articles/number. 'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used before a noun. 'Like many tourists know' is unnatural; 'as many tourists know' is correct. 'Moment' should be plural 'moments' (article error/countable). Also split into two sentences to fix run-on. Suggestion: hyphenate compound adjectives and use 'as' for 'as many people know'.

× However, that didn't happen when I was in Taiwan, which is overcrowded everywhere.

✓ However, that didn't happen when I was in Taiwan, which was overcrowded everywhere.

Tense inconsistency: main clause uses past tense 'didn't happen' so the relative clause describing Taiwan should also use past tense ('was overcrowded'). Using present tense 'is overcrowded' would imply a general present truth, but the context refers to that past visit. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent by using past tense throughout when describing past experiences.