视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise, correct minor grammar, and add a linking word to organise ideas. Avoid repeating 'photography' and provide a brief specific example of a memorable shot. Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing natural scenery like trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moments. For example, last month I captured a sunset reflection on a river that looked like a painting, which reminded me why I enjoy taking photos. Sometimes I also take creative shadow shots when I walk around the city.

建议: This answer is clear and specific; you can improve by using a linking word at the start of the second sentence and varying vocabulary (e.g., 'solitude' instead of 'isolated'). Keep sentences concise and natural.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because natural scenery like trees and rivers helps me relax. Moreover, I appreciate the solitude there, so I can take long walks or read by the water without distractions.

建议: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary errors (e.g., 'peaceful mood' not 'movie'), avoid vague negatives, and give one concrete contrastive detail. Use a linking word to connect contrasting ideas and fix grammar (e.g., 'didn't happen' -> 'I didn't experience this').

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel less crowded. For example, in Australia I found many well-known landscapes but still experienced a peaceful mood, whereas in Taiwan the cities and popular sites were often overcrowded so I couldn’t relax.

× I love photographing natural scenery such as trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moment.

✓ I love photographing natural scenery such as trees, rivers and sunsets because it helps me preserve peaceful moments.

The noun 'moment' should be plural 'moments' because 'preserve peaceful' refers to repeated or general experiences rather than a single instance. Use the plural to match the general sense and the plural subjects 'trees, rivers and sunsets'. Suggestion: use 'moments' when talking about repeated or multiple occasions.

× Sometimes I stop to take creative shots of my shadows when I am working for the city.

✓ Sometimes I stop to take creative shots of my shadow when I am working for the city.

The phrase 'my shadows' is odd because a person typically has one shadow; the singular 'shadow' is correct. This is an issue of noun form used with the present participle context. Suggestion: use 'my shadow' to refer to a single person's shadow.

× I prefer views in remote areas because the scenery such as trees and rivers help me relax.

✓ I prefer views in remote areas because the scenery such as trees and rivers helps me relax.

The subject 'the scenery' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. This is a singular/plural agreement issue. Suggestion: match the verb to the singular noun 'scenery' or reword to plural: 'places such as trees and rivers help me relax.'

× I also enjoy being isolated there since no one bothers me and I can go for long walks or read by the water without distractions.

✓ I also enjoy being isolated there since no one bothers me and I can go for long walks or read by the water without distractions.

No grammatical error detected that matches the provided list; the sentence is correct in present tense and structure. No change needed.

× For instance, in Australia, even though there are some famous landscapes that many tourists know, I can still enjoy the peaceful movie.

✓ For instance, in Australia, even though there are some famous landscapes that many tourists know, I can still enjoy the peaceful mood.

'Movie' is incorrect in this context; the intended noun is likely 'mood' or 'tranquility'. This is a vocabulary choice but relates to singular/plural noun selection. Suggestion: use 'mood' or 'tranquility' to express a peaceful atmosphere.

× However, it didn't happen when I was in Taiwan, which is overcrowded in each city and landscape.

✓ However, it didn't happen when I was in Taiwan, which is overcrowded in every city and landscape.

The phrase 'in each city and landscape' is awkward; 'every city and landscape' is more natural. The past tense 'didn't happen' is fine. This correction improves quantifier choice and collocation. Suggestion: use 'every' for general statements about all members of a group.