视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific details (why you like it and what you do with the photos). Use correct noun forms and clearer linking. Avoid filler words and informal exclamations.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I visit a scenic place I usually take several wide shots and close-ups so I can share the best images with my friends and family later.

建议: Give a direct preference sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' only when contrasting, and avoid repeating phrases. Correct vocabulary (urban, rural, prefer, because) and clear sentence structure will improve coherence.

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the dramatic skyline and architectural variety. For instance, tall buildings and city lights create interesting compositions, and I often photograph reflections on glass façades to capture that atmosphere.

建议: Answer directly whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, then explain why with specific details or comparisons. Reduce hesitation (uh) and use precise adjectives (beautiful, impressive) and correct grammar (buildings are impressive). Add a brief example to make your point concrete.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I appreciate the familiar architecture and cultural details. For example, our city centre has historic buildings and ornate facades that I find more interesting to photograph than generic tourist spots abroad.

× Personally, I really like to take a picture in a stunning view because this is a excellent. Sound memory later which I can show to my chapter. Cheers.

✓ Personally, I really like to take pictures of stunning views because they make excellent souvenirs that I can show to my friends.

Errors: 'a excellent' uses wrong article before a vowel sound and wrong adjective form; 'take a picture in a stunning view' has incorrect preposition and singular/plural; 'Sound memory later which I can show to my chapter. Cheers.' is fragmented and uses incorrect nouns. Fixes: change 'a picture' to plural 'pictures' to match general preference (Singular and plural issue ID 1), use 'of' not 'in' for photographing views (preposition issue ID 11), replace 'a excellent' with 'an excellent' or better rephrase to 'excellent souvenirs' (article error ID 22 and adjective use ID 13), combine fragments into a complete sentence and replace 'chapter' with 'friends' for natural meaning. Suggestion: practice using articles 'a'/'an' and plural nouns when speaking about general habits, and connect ideas with relative clauses (that/which).

× It depends, it depends on where I am because I both really enjoy it to take picture and prefer the view. But if I have to say one it's the urban eras. A really a big fan of that height huge.

✓ It depends on where I am because I really enjoy taking pictures and prefer urban views. But if I have to choose, it's urban areas. I'm a big fan of the tall buildings there.

Errors: 'enjoy it to take picture' uses wrong verb pattern—after 'enjoy' use gerund 'taking' (Verb + -ing form ID 8); 'take picture' missing article/plural (Singular and plural issue ID 1); 'urban eras' is a wrong word—should be 'urban areas' (vocabulary/preposition/adjective order; treat as article/word choice ID 22/11); 'A really a big fan of that height huge.' is ungrammatical fragment and wrong word order (sentence structure ID 26 and adjective order ID 18). Fixes: use 'enjoy taking pictures', use 'urban areas', and rephrase fragments into full sentences: 'But if I have to choose, it's urban areas. I'm a big fan of the tall buildings there.' Suggestion: learn verb patterns (enjoy + -ing), check plural forms, and practice forming complete sentences with subject and verb.

× Uh, I can see that our city is one of the most beautiful. Uh, so I really, uh, really big fan of the overview uh, everywhere you can see stunning and excellent buildings, which is very impressing.

✓ I think our city is one of the most beautiful, so I am a big fan of its skyline; everywhere you can see stunning and excellent buildings, which is very impressive.

Errors: 'I can see that' is awkward for opinion—use 'I think' or 'I believe' (sentence structure ID 26). 'really big fan of the overview' misuses noun 'overview' instead of 'skyline' or 'view' (word choice/adjective issue ID 13). 'which is very impressing' uses wrong adjective form; use 'impressive' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs ID 13). Also sentence fragments and missing verb 'am' in 'really big fan' (sentence structure/subject-verb agreement ID 26/27). Fixes: add verb 'am', replace 'overview' with 'skyline', and use 'impressive'. Suggestion: review adjective forms that end with -ing vs -ive and choose the noun that fits context; ensure each sentence has a subject and correct verb form.