视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve clarity, grammar and word choice. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct collocations (e.g., "scenes" or "views" not "fields" unless you mean farmland), and fix verb and phrase errors ("helps me keep" -> "helps me preserve", "lasting memories" -> "lasting memories" but idiomatically "lasting memories" is OK; "paying" is incorrect). Keep answer concise (1–3 sentences) and add one specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me preserve lasting memories. For example, when I travel I like to photograph coastal sunsets and busy markets so I can remember the atmosphere later.

建议: Fix repetition and grammar, and make the response more natural and specific. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Replace "I feel more refreshing" with "I feel more refreshed" or "it relaxes me". Add a brief specific example to support the preference.

示例: I prefer rural areas because there is less noise and pollution than in cities, so the air feels fresher and it's more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy walking by quiet lakes and listening to birds, which helps me relax.

建议: Correct vocabulary and grammar and make the answer concise and coherent. Use "experience" instead of "expenses", and "different cultures and environments" (plural). Remove filler phrases like "It's my it's a good choice" and use a linking word such as "because" to give a clear reason. Provide a concrete example of what you like to experience abroad.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I can experience different cultures and natural environments. For example, I love visiting rice terraces in Southeast Asia to see traditional farming methods and landscapes that are very different from home.

× I like taking photos of different fields.

✓ I like taking photos of different views.

The student used 'fields' while the examiner asked about 'views'. This is not strictly grammatical but a lexical mismatch; however it can be treated as a wording/meaning issue. Suggestion: use 'views' to match the question topic and avoid confusion.

× I like capturing interesting moments because it helps me keep paying lasting memories, especially in travelling.

✓ I like capturing interesting moments because it helps me keep lasting memories, especially when traveling.

Problems: 'keep paying lasting memories' is ungrammatical (wrong verbs and word order), 'travelling' with 'in' is awkward. Correct to 'keep lasting memories' or better 'preserve lasting memories'. Use 'when traveling' instead of 'in travelling'. Suggestion: use 'preserve lasting memories' or 'keep lasting memories' and 'when traveling'.

× I prefer rural areas because compared to cities there is less less noise and pollution.

✓ I prefer rural areas because, compared to cities, there is less noise and pollution.

Error: repeated word 'less less' is a duplication. Also punctuation and word order improved by adding commas. 'Less noise and pollution' is correct because noise and pollution are uncountable; use 'less' (or 'fewer' for countable nouns). Suggestion: remove duplicate and add commas for clarity.

× I feel more refreshing and relaxed.

✓ I feel more refreshed and relaxed.

'Refreshing' is an adjective describing something that causes refreshment. To describe the person's state, use the past participle/adjective 'refreshed'. Suggestion: use 'refreshed' for personal feeling and 'refreshing' for things that cause the feeling.

× I prefer fields in other countries because I can expenses other culture and environment.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I can experience other cultures and environments.

Multiple errors: 'fields' should be 'views' to match the question; 'can expenses' is wrong verb—use 'experience'; 'other culture and environment' needs plural 'cultures and environments' for general sense. Suggestion: use 'experience other cultures and environments' to express encountering different places.

× It's my it's a good choice for me to try new thing.

✓ It's a good choice for me to try new things.

The sentence has duplication 'It's my it's' and singular 'thing' should be plural 'things' for general activities. Remove the redundant phrase and pluralize 'things'. Suggestion: 'It's a good choice for me to try new things' or 'It's a great way for me to try new things.'