视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and add a brief specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a reason using a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

示例: Yes — I enjoy photographing natural views, especially sunrises and sunsets. For example, I often capture the colors over the sea or behind mountains because I feel more connected to nature and it helps me relax.

建议: Use correct verb forms and a concise comparison. Begin with a clear preference, then support it with a specific reason and one short example. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and less polluted. For example, I enjoy photographing misty fields and old farmhouses early in the morning because the light is soft and the atmosphere is calm.

建议: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and two contrasting supporting points. Use correct tense and linking words like 'when' and 'while'. Be specific about what you photograph abroad versus at home.

示例: It depends. When I travel abroad, I usually photograph famous architectural landmarks, such as cathedrals or modern skyscrapers, because they reflect the culture. Meanwhile, in my own country I focus on natural sites like beaches and forests.

× Yes definitely I like to picture of a natural views such as sunset, sunrise because I feel when I take a picture I close to nature.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like to take pictures of natural views such as sunsets and sunrises because I feel close to nature when I take a picture.

Multiple errors: 'like to picture' wrong verb phrase — use 'like to take pictures' (Verb + to-infinitive). 'a natural views' mixes singular article with plural noun — remove 'a' and use plural 'views' (Singular and plural issue). 'sunset, sunrise' should be plural and parallel form 'sunsets and sunrises'. Word order: 'I feel when I take a picture I close to nature' is ungrammatical; correct order is 'I feel close to nature when I take a picture'. Suggestions: use 'like to take pictures' or 'I enjoy photographing', ensure noun number matches articles, and place time/subordinate clause after main clause or with correct order: 'I feel close to nature when...'. Keep verbs in simple present for habits.

× Honestly speaking, I like to taking picture of nature in countryside because the environment is very peaceful and free from any pollution.

✓ Honestly speaking, I like taking pictures of nature in the countryside because the environment is very peaceful and free from pollution.

'I like to taking' mixes to-infinitive with -ing; choose one: 'I like taking' or 'I like to take' (Verb + -ing form / Infinitive issue). 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (Singular and plural issue). 'in countryside' needs the definite article 'the' before 'countryside' (Article errors). 'free from any pollution' is acceptable but more natural as 'free from pollution' (Incorrect use of quantifiers). Suggestions: use 'I like taking pictures' or 'I like to take pictures', include 'the countryside', and use plural where appropriate.

× Well, it depends on situation. When I travel abroad, uh that time I taking picture of famous buildings under architecture, but when I live in my country that time I taking picture of natural sites.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation. When I travel abroad, I take pictures of famous architectural buildings, but when I am in my country, I take pictures of natural sites.

Several issues: 'depends on situation' needs the definite article 'the situation' (Article errors). 'When I travel abroad... that time I taking picture' uses present simple for habitual action but wrongly uses present participle 'taking' without auxiliary; correct is 'I take pictures' (Verb + -ing form / Present tense issue). 'under architecture' is incorrect word choice; use 'architectural' as adjective or 'famous buildings' (Incorrect use of adjectives). 'when I live in my country' is odd for being in a place; use 'when I am in my country' (Incorrect use of verbs/pronouns). Also pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures'. Suggestions: use consistent simple present for habitual actions ('I take pictures'), include articles where needed, use 'architectural' to describe buildings, and use 'be' verbs for location ('am in').