视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 表达不连贯，句子断裂且语法错误较多。需要：1) 用完整句子直接回答（主题句）；2) 用连接词将理由和补充信息连贯起来；3) 修正语法错误（如时态、否定形式和词序），并使用更准确的词汇（例如 “not good at” 而非 “not worse in”）。建议回答控制在3-4句内，提供具体例子或说明如何在网上学习摄影技巧。

示例: I don't really like taking photos of landscapes because I'm not very good at photography. However, I often look for landscape photos and tutorials online to learn techniques and composition. For example, I watch videos about rule of thirds and lighting to improve my skills.

建议: 回答有明确倾向，但表达混乱且词汇错误（如 “get to the wheels” 和 “trans public transport”）。需要：1) 用一到两句清楚表达偏好并给出具体理由；2) 使用正确词汇（public transport, subway, convenient）并用连接词（because, for example）组织句子；3) 避免无谓停顿或多余的词。可补充一例城市景观点或对比农村的简单说明。

示例: I prefer views in urban areas because cities are more convenient and offer diverse scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing modern architecture and busy streets, and public transport like the subway makes it easy to visit different spots.

建议: 回答意图清晰但断断续续，重复且缺少具体细节。需要：1) 用完整句子直接表述偏好并给出具体原因；2) 用连接词（because, so）避免重复词语；3) 提供具体例子说明如何通过旅行了解文化或享受风景，句子数控制在2-3句内。

示例: I prefer views in other countries because traveling abroad lets me experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, visiting historical sites and local markets helps me understand traditions and enjoy scenery I can't find at home.

× Well, actually, I. Didn't like. I don't like take pictures of different views because. I'm not worse in. Taking photos. But. I will search on the internet to look for some information about the landscape to learn from it.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't like it before. I don't like taking pictures of different views because I'm not good at taking photos. But I will search the internet for information about landscapes to learn from them.

句子被多处断句和不正确的词形影响流畅性。原句中存在句子结构错误（格 26），比如“I. Didn't like. I don't like take pictures”把一个完整想法错误拆分且动词形式不对。将句子合并并修正动词形式：use “didn't like it before”表示过去不喜欢，用现在时“I don't like taking pictures”并将“take”改为动名词“taking”。另外“I'm not worse in taking photos”应为“I'm not good at taking photos”更符合搭配；“search on the internet to look for some information about the landscape”冗余，改为“search the internet for information about landscapes”。建议：说话时先在脑中组织完整句子，避免随意断句；注意动词时态与动名词用法，以及固定搭配“good at + -ing”。

× I don't like take pictures of different views because.

✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views because...

动词后接另一个动词做宾语时，通常需要动名词形式（Grammar Problem Type 8）。原句中“like take”应为“like taking”。建议：记住like/hate/enjoy/prefer等动词后用动名词。

× I'm not worse in. Taking photos.

✓ I'm not good at taking photos.

原句使用“worse in”不符合英语习惯，意图表达“我不擅长”，应使用形容词短语“good at + -ing”。这是形容词用法错误（Grammar Problem Type 13）。建议：常见表达“be good at doing sth.”，不要用“worse in”。

× I will search on the internet to look for some information about the landscape to learn from it.

✓ I will search the internet for information about landscapes to learn from them.

短语“search on the internet”更常见的是“search the internet”，且“look for some information about the landscape”中“the landscape”使用单数受限，且代词“it”指代不清，改为复数“landscapes”并用“them”。这是介词/介词短语和代词指代问题的结合，但主要为介词使用不当（Grammar Problem Type 11）。建议：使用固定搭配“search the internet for ...”，并注意复数与代词一致。

× Actually, I prefer. Views in urban areas. Because. It is really. Convenient to get to the wheels. For there are many trans public transport like Subway or. But.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because it is really convenient to get around there. There are many public transport options like the subway.

原句断句混乱、词序和搭配错误，属于句子结构错误（Grammar Problem Type 26）。“get to the wheels”不自然，意图是“get around”或“get to places”；“trans public transport like Subway or”词序错误且不完整，应为“public transport options like the subway”。建议：合并短句形成完整句子，使用正确短语“get around”或“get to places”，并注意名词复数及冠词。

× For there are many trans public transport like Subway or.

✓ There are many public transport options like the subway.

句中“trans public transport”词序错误且缺少冠词，且“Subway”作为普通名词需小写并加定冠词或作为服务名时大写并完整。这是冠词/文章使用及词序错误（Grammar Problem Type 22 和 17），这里归为文章错误。建议：说“the subway”或“subways”或“public transport options”。

× Actually, I prefer views in other countries. Because I. Because, travelling, travelling in other countries. Can know more about different culture. In this country. And. I can also enjoy the.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in other countries because traveling in other countries can help me learn more about different cultures, and I can also enjoy the scenery there.

原句多次断句且缺主谓结构，属于句子结构错误（Grammar Problem Type 26）。“Can know more about different culture”缺主语且“culture”应使用复数“cultures”；“In this country”位置和含义混乱，最后一句不完整。建议：合并为完整句，确保主语和谓语齐全，注意可数名词复数形式并完成句子表达。

× Can know more about different culture.

✓ I can learn more about different cultures.

原句缺主语且用词不自然，“know more about”可以，但需主语“I can know”不常用，且“culture”应为复数“cultures”。这是形容词/名词用法错误（Grammar Problem Type 13）。建议：使用“I can learn more about different cultures”更地道。