视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 注意语法与流利度：回答应连贯且句子完整。避免重复停顿，使用正确时态和结构（例如“I don't like taking pictures of landscapes because I'm not good at photography”）。增加1-2个具体原因或例子并使用连接词（for example, so）来支撑观点。

示例: I don't really like taking pictures of landscapes because I'm not very good at photography, so I prefer to study photos online to learn techniques. For example, I often watch tutorials and analyze composition and lighting to improve my skills.

建议: 注意表达连贯性与词汇准确性：用完整句子直接回答并给出具体理由。使用恰当词汇（public transport, convenient）并用连接词（because, therefore, for example）衔接原因和补充。避免模糊或不完整的句子。

示例: I prefer views in urban areas because they are more convenient to reach, with many types of public transport such as subways and buses. For example, I can quickly visit parks, museums and viewpoints without long travel times.

建议: 提高句子完整性和细节：不要重复单词，使用完整句子并展开具体细节，如想了解哪些文化差异或举例说明你能享受什么（food, architecture）。使用连接词（because, so, for instance）来组织信息。

示例: I prefer views in other countries because traveling abroad lets me learn about different cultures and lifestyles. For instance, I enjoy seeing unique architecture and trying local food, which gives me a deeper understanding of the place.

× Well, actually, I. Didn't like. I don't like take pictures of different views because. I'm not worse in. Taking photos. But. I will search on the internet to look for some information about the landscape to learn from it.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't use to like taking pictures of different views, but now I do. I'm not very good at taking photos, so I search the internet for information about landscapes to learn from them.

句子有多处结构问题：断句不连贯、动词形式错误、时态和短语搭配不当。应将零散短句合并为完整句子；“didn't like”后面接动名词“taking”；“I'm not worse in”为错误表达，改为“I'm not very good at”；“search on the internet to look for some information”重复啰嗦，简化为“search the internet for information”；“about the landscape”应与“learn from them”保持一致（复数代词指代多处风景）。建议多练习完整句子表达，注意动词短语搭配（like + -ing；good at + -ing），避免重复表达。

× I don't like take pictures of different views because.

✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views because...

动词“like”后应接动名词（-ing形式）表示喜好，故将“take”改为“taking”。另外句尾不应突兀终止，应补充原因或用省略号表示未说完。建议记住 like + -ing 的固定结构。

× I'm not worse in. Taking photos.

✓ I'm not very good at taking photos.

“not worse in”不是自然表达，应使用“not very good at + -ing”来表达不擅长或一般；“Taking”首字母不应大写且应与前半句连成完整句。建议学习常用评价结构：be good/bad at + -ing。

× But. I will search on the internet to look for some information about the landscape to learn from it.

✓ But I will search the internet for information about landscapes to learn from them.

原句中“search on the internet to look for”重复表达，“about the landscape”与后文“it”指代不明，改为复数并用复数代词“them”。建议避免重复短语，注意代词的一致性。

× Actually, I prefer. Views in urban areas. Because. It is really. Convenient to get to the wheels. For there are many trans public transport like Subway or. But.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because it is very convenient to get around by public transport, such as the subway.

原句断裂严重、词序混乱。“get to the wheels”不是正确表达，应为“get around”或“travel around”；“trans public transport”词序错误且冗余，正确为“public transport”；“Subway”首字母不必大写且应为“the subway”或“subways”。建议连贯表达完整原因，注意固定搭配（get around, public transport, such as）。

× Convenient to get to the wheels.

✓ convenient to get around

“get to the wheels”是错误的介词和名词搭配，应使用短语“get around”表示出行方便。建议记住常用短语搭配而非字面直译。

× It is really. Convenient to get to the wheels.

✓ It is really convenient to get around.

断句导致副词与形容词分开。应将副词“really”与形容词“convenient”相邻；并改正后半短语为“get around”。建议写作时保持副词与被修饰词靠近。

× For there are many trans public transport like Subway or. But.

✓ There are many forms of public transport, such as the subway.

“For”用法多余且句尾不完整；“trans public transport”词序与用词错误；“like Subway or”不完整。改为完整句并给出示例。建议用完整从句并列举示例时确保结构完整。

× Actually, I prefer views in other countries. Because I. Because, travelling, travelling in other countries. Can know more about different culture.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in other countries because travelling in other countries lets me learn more about different cultures.

原句重复且句子断裂；“Can know”无主语，动词形式不正确，应加主语并使用动词“let/helps me to know/learn”；“different culture”应为复数“different cultures”。建议避免重复，保证主语和谓语一致，并使用复数名词表示多种文化。

× In this country. And. I can also enjoy the.

✓ In my own country I can also enjoy local scenery.

原句断裂且“the”后缺名词导致不完整；需补全名词短语如“local scenery”或“local views”。建议写句子时检查是否缺少名词或谓语，确保句子完整。