视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答えは意味が通じますが、表現がやや不自然で冗長な箇所があります。まず主旨を明確にするトピック文を作り、不要な繰り返し（“as usual”、二重の“I”）を避けてください。さらに、理由や具体例を1つ加えると説得力が増します。つなぎ語（e.g. however, but, when）を適切に使い、文は3文以内に収めると自然です。

示例: I don't usually take pictures of random scenery. However, when I travel I tend to photograph interesting views, such as coastal sunsets or historic streets, to remember the trip.

建议: 良い構成で主旨（rural）を明確に述べていますが、語法や語彙の誤り（"the natures"）を直し、つなぎ表現をもう少し自然にしてください。具体例を一つ加えて詳述するとさらに良くなります。文は簡潔に2〜3文でまとめましょう。

示例: I definitely prefer rural views because I love natural landscapes, especially mountains and wildlife. However, I occasionally photograph urban scenes, like striking skyscrapers at night, when I find their architecture interesting.

建议: 意図は伝わりますが、文法と接続が不自然です（"tell me Japanese history deeply", 文頭の"Whereas"の誤用）。まずは直接的なトピック文を作り、理由を具体的に述べましょう。例を挙げて文化的背景や建築の特徴を説明すると説得力が増します。

示例: I prefer landscapes in Japan because I admire traditional buildings that reflect the country's history and culture. For example, old temples and wooden houses often show historical craftsmanship that I find fascinating.

× No, I hardly ever take a picture of other scenery as usual, whereas when I go to travel I I tend to take photos of other views.

✓ No, I hardly ever take pictures of scenery; however, when I travel I tend to take photos of different views.

'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the speaker refers to taking photos in general. 'Scenery' is uncountable, so 'of scenery' is correct rather than 'of other scenery'. 'As usual' is unnecessary and awkward here; use a contrastive connector like 'however'. Remove the duplicated 'I'. Use 'different views' instead of 'other views' for natural phrasing.

× Definitely, I prefer rural areas. This is because I love the natures, especially mountains and wildlife. However, I sometimes take pictures of high rise buildings in urban areas.

✓ Definitely, I prefer rural areas. This is because I love nature, especially mountains and wildlife. However, I sometimes take pictures of high-rise buildings in urban areas.

'Nature' is an uncountable noun and should not use the plural form 'natures'. 'High rise' describing a building should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. These corrections make the sentence grammatically natural.

× I prefer Japanese landscapes since I'm a big fan of Japanese buildings which tell me Japanese history deeply. Whereas it is beautiful.

✓ I prefer Japanese landscapes because I'm a big fan of Japanese buildings, which reflect Japanese history. They are also very beautiful.

'Which tell me Japanese history deeply' is awkward and ungrammatical: buildings do not 'tell me' history deeply. Use 'reflect Japanese history' to convey that buildings show historical features. Also, 'whereas it is beautiful' is an incorrect connector and pronoun; use 'They are also very beautiful' to refer back to landscapes or buildings. Replaced 'since' with 'because' for clarity; both are acceptable but 'because' is more explicit.