视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., verb forms and articles). Also keep within 2–4 sentences and stay on-topic (views, not restaurants).

示例: No, I don’t usually take pictures of different views. I prefer to enjoy the scene in the moment because taking photos can be time-consuming and distract me from the experience. However, if a view is very unique, I might take a quick photo for memories.

建议: Organize your response: give a clear preference sentence, then explain with specific details and a linking word (e.g., because, since). Use correct nouns and plural forms, and avoid vague phrases. Limit to 2–4 sentences and complete comparisons when contrasting with urban views.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer natural scenery like mountains, rivers and forests. For example, I enjoy hiking by a river where the air is fresh and the landscape is peaceful, whereas urban views are dominated by buildings and traffic.

建议: Answer directly and give specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, since, and however). Correct grammar (avoid double negatives, use singular/plural correctly) and be concise. Mention one or two clear reasons such as cost and convenience, and give a brief example to support your point.

示例: I prefer sightseeing in my own country because travel is cheaper and more convenient. For instance, I don’t need visas or lengthy planning, and I can easily ask locals for directions if I’m lost.

× No, I would not like to take in the pictures of the restaurant because because I'm going to somewhere.

✓ No, I would not like to take pictures of the restaurant because I'm going somewhere.

Incorrect use of the preposition 'in' after 'take' and awkward modal phrasing 'would not like to take in the pictures' plus repetition 'because because'. Use 'take pictures' (no preposition) and 'going somewhere' (more natural). Remove repeated 'because'. Use 'would not like' is acceptable but 'I do not want to take pictures' is also possible.

× I interested to see the views only but not taking the pictures because it takes time.

✓ I am interested in seeing the views only, not in taking pictures because it takes time.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present simple with adjective 'interested' and incorrect verb pattern: 'interested in' + gerund. Use 'interested in seeing' and parallel structure 'not in taking pictures'.

× Not interested in the traveling.

✓ I am not interested in traveling.

Sentence fragment missing subject and verb; 'the traveling' is unnatural here. Use complete sentence 'I am not interested in traveling' and remove the article 'the'.

× I prefer the views in the rural areas because in this there is a natural beauty's mountains, rivers, trees, forest so many things are of the nature.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas because there is natural beauty: mountains, rivers, trees and forests; so many things from nature.

Incorrect use of articles ('the rural areas' is unnecessary here), wrong phrase 'in this there is', incorrect possessive 'beauty's' and singular 'forest'. Use plural 'forests', remove incorrect possessive, and restructure to list features. Also 'of the nature' should be 'from nature' or 'in nature'.

× I like the natural beauties not as compared to the urban.

✓ I like natural beauty more than urban scenery.

Awkward plural 'natural beauties' and incorrect comparative phrase 'not as compared to the urban'. Use 'more than' for comparison and 'urban scenery' or 'urban areas'.

× In urban areas there is a human made things which are.

✓ In urban areas there are man-made things.

Subject-verb agreement and article issues: 'a human made things' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'things' with plural verb 'are' and hyphenate 'man-made' or 'human-made'. Remove unnecessary relative clause 'which are'.

× I prefer the views in our country because it's cheap and not expensive and travel is so easy in our own country.

✓ I prefer views in our country because it is cheaper and travel is easier there.

Awkward repetition 'cheap and not expensive'; use comparative 'cheaper' when comparing to other countries. 'Travel is so easy in our own country' is better as 'travel is easier there'. Also avoid repeating 'our country'.

× If we are going to outside the country, it's so costly and we don't don't know the area where we are going to and we ask the questions to somebody to reach that system.

✓ If we go outside the country, it is very costly, and we do not know the area where we are going, so we have to ask someone for directions.

Incorrect continuous tense 'are going to outside' and wrong preposition 'to outside'. Use simple present in conditional 'If we go'. Avoid double 'don't'. Phrase 'ask the questions to somebody to reach that system' is ungrammatical; use 'ask someone for directions' or 'ask for help to reach our destination'.