视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response is largely unintelligible and does not directly answer the question in a coherent way. To improve, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then add one or two brief supporting details (why you enjoy it, what kinds of views you prefer) using simple linking words. Keep answers natural, relevant vocabulary, and no more than 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. I especially enjoy photographing cityscapes because I like how buildings and lights look at dusk. For example, when I visited London I took photos of the skyline and the river to capture the atmosphere.

建议: You did not answer this question. To improve, give a direct preference (urban or rural) as the first sentence, then add one or two specific reasons and an example, linked with words such as 'because' or 'for example'. Keep it natural and concise.

示例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and natural scenery. For example, I like photographing mountains and lakes where the light and colors change throughout the day.

建议: You did not answer this question. To improve, state your preference clearly in the first sentence, then explain why with a specific reason and, if possible, a short example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to make your answer coherent.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different cultures and architecture. For instance, I took photos in London that were very different from views at home, which made my travel photos more interesting.

× Yes, now. Animation shovel. This is all meal. To London.

✓ Yes. I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to London.

The original response contains fragmentary and unrelated words that do not form a coherent sentence. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). To answer the examiner's question, the student should produce a complete sentence that states a preference and gives context. The corrected sentence combines a direct affirmation 'Yes' with a clear subject and verb 'I like taking pictures,' adds a common modifier 'especially when I travel to London' to explain context. Suggestion: always include a subject and main verb and connect ideas with linking words (and, because, when) to form complete responses.