视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, tiếp theo đưa ra 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và dùng từ nối hợp lý. Chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'taking pictures', 'showing those pictures'). Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. I find that photos help me preserve special memories, and showing them to friends or family makes those moments feel more vivid. For example, I often take landscape shots to remember places I visited.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Sửa lại từ sai (ví dụ: 'prefer views in rural areas', 'rice fields', 'scenery'). Dùng một câu chủ đề rồi thêm lý do cụ thể, có từ nối để mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thì và số ít/những danh từ số nhiều.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because I enjoy natural scenery like rivers, rice fields and mountains. These landscapes make me feel calm and relaxed, so I often take photos of them when I travel.

建议: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc, tránh tạp âm như 'uh' và sửa các lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp ('prefer', 'places'). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể và có thể cho một ví dụ. Giữ dưới 5 câu.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful places I haven't seen yet and I want to explore them. For instance, I plan to visit several national parks this year to photograph their landscapes.

× Yes, I'm really into taking picture especially when I'm traveling because I think the best way for me to give those memories beside UMM revealing those picture with friends or family will make the memories become more lively.

✓ Yes, I'm really into taking pictures, especially when I'm travelling, because I think the best way for me to preserve those memories is by sharing those pictures with friends or family, which makes the memories more vivid.

Error type: incorrect noun plural and gerund usage combined with sentence structure issues. 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural) because plural is needed when referring to photos in general. 'traveling' can be spelled 'travelling' (British) but either is acceptable; maintain consistency. The original sentence also had ungrammatical phrases 'give those memories beside UMM revealing those picture' which seems intended as 'preserve those memories by sharing those pictures'. Reconstruct the clause using 'preserve' and 'sharing' (gerund after preposition 'by') and use 'which makes the memories more vivid' to combine ideas clearly. Suggestions: use plural for countable nouns when general, use 'by' + verb-ing for expressing means, and simplify sentence into clear clauses. Grammar Problem Type ID:8

× I totally re reviews in rural area more than area because I love to see river rice refills or mountains.

✓ I totally prefer rural areas more than urban areas because I love to see rivers, rice fields, or mountains.

Error type: singular/plural and word choice. 'rural area' and 'area' should be plural 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' for general preference. 're reviews' is incorrect; likely 'prefer'. 'river rice refills' is a series of errors: 'river' should be plural 'rivers', 'rice refills' should be 'rice fields'. Suggestions: use correct verbs ('prefer'), correct plural forms for general statements, and choose correct nouns ('rice fields') and separate items with commas. Grammar Problem Type ID:1

× Watching the Kaiser view make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Watching the Kaiser view makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Error type: subject-verb agreement/verb form. 'Watching ... make' is incorrect because the subject 'Watching the Kaiser view' (a gerund phrase) is singular and requires 'makes'. Change 'make' to 'makes'. Also ensure 'Kaiser view' is the intended name; if it's 'scenic view' or 'Kaiser's view' adjust accordingly. Suggestions: match singular subject with singular verb. Grammar Problem Type ID:27

× I know that there are a lot of beautiful, uh, place in the world, but I refer views in my own country because there are a lot of, uh, place that I still don't know, and I want to discover more about them.

✓ I know that there are a lot of beautiful places in the world, but I prefer views in my own country because there are many places that I still don't know, and I want to discover more about them.

Errors: incorrect noun number and word choice. 'place' should be plural 'places' when referring generally. 'refer' is incorrect verb; should be 'prefer'. Also 'a lot of' + plural noun is acceptable, but 'many places' is more natural. Suggestions: use 'prefer' for preferences, use plural forms for general counts, and avoid filler 'uh' in formal replies. Grammar Problem Type ID:13