视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng cấu trúc câu chuẩn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp; bổ sung liên từ để mạch lạc và cụ thể hóa ví dụ. Nên sửa thì và danh từ số nhiều/số ít, loại bỏ từ thừa và giới thiệu chi tiết ngắn về tần suất và mục đích chụp ảnh.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it allows me to capture beautiful landscapes. I usually bring my camera whenever I travel or go to work, and I often photograph sunrise scenes and local architecture to remember special places.

建议: Câu trả lời cần dùng từ vựng chính xác và sửa lỗi từ sai chính tả/ngữ pháp; thêm liên kết lý do và ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích). Tránh từ không đúng như 'furious' khi muốn nói 'furrowed' hay 'furious' không phù hợp.

示例: I prefer rural and open areas because I grew up there and feel more relaxed in nature. For example, I enjoy taking photos of long rows of trees, winding rivers, and wide fields, which feel peaceful compared to busy city streets.

建议: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác; giải thích rõ 'familiar' và 'reflect my culture' bằng ví dụ cụ thể; tránh câu bỏ dở. Thêm liên từ để kết nối ý và nêu cả quan điểm về cảnh nước ngoài nếu muốn so sánh.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and reflect my culture and memories. For instance, traditional houses, local festivals, and countryside landscapes remind me of my childhood, although I also appreciate scenic views abroad for their different architecture and colours.

× I like taking picture of different view because I can capture beautiful landscape.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I can capture beautiful landscapes.

The nouns 'picture', 'view', and 'landscape' should be plural to match the general meaning (taking photos of various views and capturing landscapes). Use plural when referring to more than one or to things in general: pictures, views, landscapes.

× I often bring my camera when I go for work or travel for.

✓ I often bring my camera when I go to work or travel.

The phrase 'go for work' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go to work'. Also 'travel for' is incomplete and unnecessary; simply 'travel' or 'travel abroad' is appropriate. No present participle change required other than fixing the preposition and removing extra word.

× I can photograph.

✓ I can take photographs.

'Photograph' as a verb needs an object in this context. 'I can photograph' sounds incomplete; use 'I can take photographs' or 'I can photograph them' to complete the sentence and clarify the object.

× I prefer rural areas and open area because I grew up there.

✓ I prefer rural areas and open areas because I grew up there.

'Open area' should be plural 'open areas' to match 'rural areas' and the general idea of multiple types of open places. Maintain consistent plurality when listing similar categories.

× I like furious and row of tree and river.

✓ I like forests, rows of trees, and rivers.

'Furious' is the wrong word; likely intended 'furious' -> 'forests' or 'lush' etc. 'Row of tree' should be 'rows of trees' and 'river' should be plural 'rivers' or 'the river' depending on meaning. Use nouns that fit the context: forests, rows of trees, and rivers.

× I enjoy the view in my country because the IT make me familiar, it reflect my culture and memory.

✓ I enjoy the views in my country because they make me feel familiar; they reflect my culture and memories.

Pronoun and verb agreement errors: 'the view' -> 'views' to match general meaning. 'the IT' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'they' referring to the views. Verbs need agreement: 'make' -> 'make me feel familiar' or 'make me feel at home'; 'it reflect' -> 'they reflect'. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' when speaking generally.

× I also like.

✓ I also like them.

The sentence is incomplete; 'I also like' needs an object (e.g., 'them' referring to views) to be grammatical and clear.