视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Use linking words (for example, because) to make it coherent and keep to 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially when I have my own camera. For example, I often photograph mountains and historic buildings because I like capturing textures and light, which make my photos more interesting.

建议: Answer directly and give specific reasons. Begin with a clear preference, then add one or two supporting details using linking words such as because or for instance. Avoid repeating ideas and filler sounds.

示例: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse subjects such as distinctive architecture, busy parks and street scenes. For instance, I enjoy photographing crowds and building facades since they create dynamic compositions.

建议: Be structured: state your current practice and future preference clearly. Use one linking word (however, so) and give a specific example of what you want to photograph abroad. Reduce repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., “architecture”, “take pictures”).

示例: I have taken many photos in my own country, but I would like to photograph views abroad in the future. For example, I want to visit Europe to capture old architecture and historic streets because they offer textures and details I don’t often see at home.

× I mean, uh, it's also depends on your camera, I mean.

✓ I mean, uh, it also depends on your camera, I mean.

The verb 'depend' requires third person singular agreement with the subject 'it', so use 'depends' after 'it'. The original used 'it's also depends' which incorrectly combines the contraction 'it's' (it is) with another finite verb. Correct structure: 'it also depends on...'. Suggestion: remove the contraction 'it's' and use 'it' + 'depends'.

× I prefer taking pictures from buildings, from city views, like parks, crowd, uh, so I think I prefer urban views and well, but I know I have lots of friends who loves taking pictures.

✓ I prefer taking pictures of buildings and city views, like parks and crowds, so I think I prefer urban views, but I know I have lots of friends who love taking pictures.

Several issues: 'taking pictures from buildings' is unnatural—use 'of' for subjects of photos. 'Crowd' should be plural 'crowds' or 'a crowd'; here plural fits. 'Lots of friends who loves' has a subject-verb agreement error: plural 'friends' requires 'love' (see problem type 27), and this correction also addresses quantifier/word choice. The main listed type matched is incorrect use of quantifiers/plurals; however subject-verb agreement is also present. Suggestion: use 'of' with objects photographed, pluralize 'crowds', and match verb to plural subject 'friends'.

× I have lots of friends who loves taking pictures.

✓ I have lots of friends who love taking pictures.

Relative clause 'who love' refers to plural antecedent 'friends', so the verb must be plural 'love' not 'loves'. This is a third person plural subject-verb agreement issue. Suggestion: ensure the verb in the relative clause agrees with the noun it refers to.

× So, uh, actually I took lots of pictures in my country. So now I would like to go broad, see foreign countries, different countries and take picture from their own arch architecture, like old scenes, old landscapes old.

✓ So, uh, actually I took lots of pictures in my country. Now I would like to travel abroad, see different foreign countries and take pictures of their architecture, like old scenes and old landscapes.

Several errors: 'go broad' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'travel abroad' (word choice). 'Take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' or 'take a picture' depending on context; here plural fits. Preposition with 'architecture' should be 'of their architecture'. Also 'arch architecture' is repetition/error and should be 'architecture'. The listed problem type addressed is verb + -ing and related word form issues: using correct verb forms ('travel abroad', 'take pictures') and noun forms. Suggestion: use standard collocations ('travel abroad', 'take pictures of') and correct noun/word repetitions.