视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear words (‘firm views’, ‘post chairs’), correct small grammar issues, and limit to about 2–4 coherent sentences. Use linking words to explain why and give one specific example.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it lets me capture various angles and moods. For example, I often shoot the riverbank at sunrise to collect several images that I later arrange into a collage. This helps me remember the place and practice my composition skills.

建议: Answer directly and compare clearly. Use linking words (however, while, because) to contrast urban and rural views, give one specific reason for each, and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer different qualities. Urban views are exciting and architecturally interesting, while rural views are peaceful and full of natural beauty. For instance, city rooftops can feel dynamic, whereas countryside fields are calming and nostalgic.

建议: Be specific and avoid vague or incorrect words (‘pets’). State a clear preference or say you like both, then give concrete reasons and one brief example. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and remove filler words like ‘umm’.

示例: I like views in both my country and abroad because each offers unique features. My country has attractive skylines and familiar architecture, while other countries often have different historical buildings and landscapes to discover. For example, I enjoy photographing local city skylines at dusk, but I also love capturing ancient streets when I travel abroad.

× Yes I do like taking pictures of the firm views because it helps me to get different post chairs and of and different angles of their views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of firm views because it helps me capture different compositions and angles of those scenes.

The original contains word choice and structure problems rather than a present participle rule; however 'taking' as present participle is fine. The main issues are incorrect or unclear nouns ('post chairs and of') and pronoun reference ('their views'). Correction replaces unclear phrases with 'capture different compositions and angles of those scenes' to match meaning and maintain present tense. Suggestion: use precise nouns and ensure pronouns clearly refer to the intended noun. Relevant grammar problem type ID:10

× I take the pictures and it helps me to get a good collage of pictures.

✓ I take pictures and they help me make a good collage.

The subject 'pictures' is plural, so the verb/pronoun referring back should agree. Original uses 'it helps' incorrectly referring to plural 'pictures'. Correction uses 'they help' and simplifies phrasing. Suggestion: match singular/plural subjects with corresponding verbs and pronouns. Relevant grammar problem type ID:27

× I prefer both because views from urban areas give more than contemporary effect and has good sceneries and views from urban areas and bring memories and nostalgic effects.

✓ I prefer both because views in urban areas produce a contemporary effect and have nice scenery, and views in rural areas bring back memories and create a nostalgic feeling.

Errors include adjective/adverb misuse ('more than contemporary effect'), repeated phrase 'views from urban areas', incorrect verb agreement 'has', and uncountable noun 'scenery' used as 'sceneries'. Correction clarifies contrast between urban and rural, adjusts agreement ('have' for plural 'views'), and uses correct nouns. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use 'scenery' (uncountable), and ensure verbs agree with their subjects. Relevant grammar problem type ID:13

× OK so my country has pets that has very good views with skylines and good architecture while some other countries are visited has better architecture and better scenes.

✓ My country has places with nice skylines and architecture, while some other countries I have visited have better architecture and scenery.

Multiple pronoun and noun errors: 'pets' is likely 'places'; 'has' should agree with plural subjects; 'countries are visited has' is ungrammatical. Correction replaces incorrect words, clarifies 'I have visited' and matches verb agreement ('countries... have'). Suggestion: choose correct nouns, use relative or participle clauses properly ('countries I have visited'), and ensure subject-verb agreement. Relevant grammar problem type ID:12

× So umm a few of both helps me to know how.

✓ So, a few of each help me learn how to compose photographs.

Original is vague and ungrammatical: 'a few of both' is unclear and 'helps' disagrees with plural idea. Correction clarifies meaning and uses plural verb 'help' to match 'a few'. Suggestion: be concise, state what 'a few' refers to, and ensure verb agrees with subject. Relevant grammar problem type ID:26