视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý một vài điểm: (1) Tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt dài: câu thứ hai hơi dài, có thể tách để rõ ràng hơn. (2) Một số từ không chính xác/ngữ pháp nhỏ: "shorts" có thể gây nhầm nếu ý là "shots" hoặc "photos"; kiểm tra chính tả. (3) Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu và dùng liên từ phù hợp để kết nối ý (e.g., "because", "so", "also"). (4) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: camera bạn dùng hoặc nơi chụp gần đây) sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

示例: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I often photograph mountains at sunrise because the light is beautiful and it makes my photos more dramatic. I also enjoy capturing modern cityscapes when I travel, since they remind me of the people and places I visit. I usually share my best photos on Instagram to preserve those memories.

建议: Câu trả lời có cấu trúc so sánh hợp lý nhưng có lỗi ngữ nghĩa/ từ vựng: (1) "expensive feels" sai về ngữ pháp và nghĩa — có lẽ bạn muốn nói "peaceful feeling" hoặc "a sense of peace". (2) Câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn; tránh dùng cụm "on the one hand/on the other hand" nếu không cân bằng chi tiết cho cả hai bên. (3) Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ địa điểm nông thôn bạn thích) và dùng liên từ để nối ý rõ hơn.

示例: I enjoy both, but I usually prefer rural views. The countryside offers fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere that helps me relax, especially when I visit with my family. In contrast, the city is exciting because of its museums and restaurants, but I find rural landscapes more restorative for weekends.

建议: Câu trả lời thể hiện ý nghĩ cân bằng và nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần khắc phục: (1) Một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng/ngữ pháp: viết "these sense" sai, nên là "the sense"; "awe inspiring" nên viết "awe-inspiring" hoặc "awe inspiring" được nối. (2) Câu hơi dài, có thể tách thành 2 câu để rõ ràng. (3) Bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể về nơi bạn thích trong nước hoặc nước ngoài sẽ tăng thuyết phục.

示例: I'm torn between the two. I love familiar landscapes in my own country because they give me a sense of belonging and special memories, for example visiting my hometown beach. At the same time, I enjoy awe-inspiring scenery abroad, such as the mountains I saw on a trip to Nepal, because travelling offers new perspectives.

× I also find photography a relaxing hobby that improves my creativity, and I often share my favorite shorts on social media.

✓ I also find photography a relaxing hobby that improves my creativity, and I often share my favorite shots on social media.

The word 'shorts' is incorrect in this context; the intended noun is 'shots' (photographs). This is not strictly an article error but falls under word choice; however within provided list, article errors (22) can be used when a wrong noun form affects clarity. Suggestion: use 'shots' for photos or 'short videos' if meaning videos. Ensure correct noun choice to match context.

× On the one hand, I love the vibrant bustle of the city with skyscrapers, restaurants, and museums because they're always something to do.

✓ On the one hand, I love the vibrant bustle of the city with skyscrapers, restaurants, and museums because there's always something to do.

Subject 'something' is singular, so the verb should be 'there's' (there is). 'They're' (they are) incorrectly makes 'something' plural. Suggestion: Use 'there's always something to do' to match singular 'something'.

× The fresh air and expensive feels really help me relax, especially when I'm with my family.

✓ The fresh air and expensive feeling really help me relax, especially when I'm with my family.

'Expensive feels' is ungrammatical: 'feels' is a verb or informal noun; 'expensive' describes cost, unlikely intended. Likely intended 'a sense of peace' or 'the peaceful feeling'. Here corrected to 'expensive feeling' is still odd; better: 'the peaceful feeling' or 'the peacefulness'. Suggestion: replace with 'the peaceful feeling' or 'the peace' to convey relaxation. Also maintain plural agreement: 'fresh air and the peaceful feeling really help me relax'.

× I'm honestly torn between the two because I love the familiar landscapes at home for these sense of belonging and the cultural memories they bring, but I also enjoy seeing exotic, awe inspiring scenery abroad when I travel because it's exciting to discover new places and perspectives.

✓ I'm honestly torn between the two because I love the familiar landscapes at home for their sense of belonging and the cultural memories they bring, but I also enjoy seeing exotic, awe-inspiring scenery abroad when I travel because it's exciting to discover new places and perspectives.

'These sense' is incorrect: 'sense' should be pluralized or possessive pronoun used. Use 'their sense of belonging' to refer to 'landscapes' (plural) and hyphenate 'awe-inspiring' as a compound adjective. Suggestion: use correct possessive pronoun 'their' and hyphenate compound adjectives to improve clarity.