视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence saying you enjoy taking photos, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (when, what you like photographing) using linking words. Correct basic grammar (articles, word order) and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing mountain scenes and early-morning sunlight because the light is soft and the colors are vivid.

建议: Give a complete sentence and add a brief reason with a linking word. Use correct prepositions and articles ("in urban areas" or "urban areas"). Expand slightly but keep within 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the variety of architecture and lively street scenes. For instance, city skylines and historic buildings often make interesting photo subjects.

建议: Answer directly and provide a clear reason with specific details. Fix grammar ("I prefer Canada because its views are beautiful") and avoid vague phrasing like "they view are good." Use linking words such as "because" or "for example."

示例: I prefer views in other countries, especially Canada, because of its dramatic mountains and clear lakes. For example, the landscapes around Banff National Park have striking peaks and turquoise water that are great for photography.

× Of course I like it. The different views, the sunlight in sunlight, in morning views of sun, a good mountains.

✓ Of course I like it. I enjoy different views, such as sunlight in the morning and beautiful mountains.

The original sentence has several preposition and article errors and unclear phrasing. 'The sunlight in sunlight' is incorrect and should be 'sunlight in the morning' (preposition 'in' + time phrase). 'In morning views of sun' is ungrammatical; use a clear phrase 'sunlight in the morning'. 'A good mountains' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'mountains'—remove 'a' and use 'beautiful mountains' (adjective choice). Use parallel structure 'such as' to list examples. Suggestions: use correct prepositions for time ('in the morning'), match articles to countable nouns, and arrange phrases clearly.

× I prefer to urban areas.

✓ I prefer urban areas.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun phrase; the preposition 'to' is unnecessary here. Use 'prefer urban areas' or 'I prefer to live in urban areas' if adding a verb. Suggestion: remove the extra 'to' when 'prefer' is followed by a noun phrase.

× Maybe I prefer Canada and the country they view are good. The mountains and the lake are so beautiful.

✓ Maybe I prefer Canada because the scenery there is beautiful. The mountains and the lake are so beautiful.

The clause 'the country they view are good' is incorrect pronoun use and subject-verb agreement. 'They' does not refer correctly to 'country'; use 'there' to indicate location or 'the scenery there'. Also 'country... are' uses plural verb for singular noun; change to 'is' if keeping 'country'. The correction uses 'scenery there is beautiful' to express intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'there' for location and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents; match singular/plural verbs to subjects.