视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms and avoid vague or incorrect word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting reason. Keep it under five sentences and natural sounding.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like capturing landscapes because they help me remember places I've visited and practice my composition skills.

建议: Work on accuracy, coherence and appropriate vocabulary. Use correct articles and singular/plural forms, avoid contradictory or inappropriate words (e.g. 'pathetic' here is wrong). Provide one clear preference sentence then 1–2 specific supporting reasons linked with connectors.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because the air is fresher and the scenery feels more natural. For example, I enjoy quiet fields and tree-lined roads, whereas cities often have noise, heavy traffic and bright streetlights.

建议: Clarify the main idea and remove hesitation. Answer directly whether you prefer local or foreign views, then give concise, specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases ('student sports') and reduce filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I know them well and appreciate their history and architecture. For instance, many local towns have historic buildings and cultural landmarks that I find fascinating.

× Of course I would love to taking pictures because I am photogenic.

✓ Of course I would love to take pictures because I am photogenic.

After 'would love' use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. 'Would love to take' is the correct verb pattern. To improve, memorize common verb patterns after modal-like expressions: 'would like/would love/want to + base verb.'

× I would like to live more in rural area instead of urban because I feel like a rural area have more fresh view, freshly fresher and everything is more real as compared to urban.

✓ I would like to live more in a rural area instead of an urban one because I feel a rural area has fresher views and everything feels more real compared to the city.

Multiple issues: missing articles before 'rural area' and 'urban' need 'a' and 'one' respectively; subject-verb agreement ('a rural area has' not 'have'); incorrect comparative forms ('fresher' not 'freshly fresher'); pluralization ('views' not 'view') and awkward phrasing ('feels more real' is natural). Improve by adding articles, matching singular/plural, using correct comparative adjective forms, and simplifying phrasing.

× It's more pathetic for me I think.

✓ It's more appealing to me, I think.

'Pathetic' has a negative meaning (pitiable), which likely isn't intended. Use an adjective that matches intent; 'appealing' or 'pleasant' fits. Also 'to me' is the correct prepositional phrase. Choose vocabulary that conveys your feeling accurately.

× Lots of noise, big city street lights, etcetera.

✓ There is lots of noise and bright city street lights, etc.

This fragment lacks a main verb and connection to the previous sentence. Starting with 'There is' forms a complete clause. Use parallel nouns connected with 'and' and choose proper adjective 'bright' for lights. Avoid using 'etcetera' in formal responses; if used, keep it concise.

× I live in my country, that's why I very much familiar with my country views because of its student sports uh, which is so rich in history as well as uh, as umm, as well as uh architecture.

✓ I live in my country, so I am very familiar with its sights because it is rich in history and architecture.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for 'very familiar' (subject + be + adjective). 'Country views' is better as 'sights' or 'scenery'; 'because of its student sports' is unclear—likely unintended phrase; removed for clarity. Maintain present tense with 'I live' and state 'it is rich' for general truths. Reduce filler words and use concise vocabulary.