视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar (subjek, kata kerja dan bentuk kata kerja), hilangkan pengulangan, dan buat jawaban lebih terstruktur: mulai dengan kalimat topik lalu beri satu atau dua detail spesifik. Gunakan linking words sederhana jika perlu (e.g., because, for example). Contoh fokus: alasan singkat + contoh spesifik objek foto.

示例: I enjoy taking photographs because I am interested in photography. I especially like capturing natural scenes and animals, for example local birds and rivers, because they often show beautiful light and textures.

建议: Perbaiki pemilihan kata (rural vs urban) dan struktur kalimat. Tentukan jawaban langsung, lalu jelaskan alasan dengan contoh konkret. Hindari kata-kata tidak jelas seperti "fuse"—gunakan vocabulary yang tepat seperti "prefer rural areas" atau "prefer urban areas" dan jelaskan dengan satu alasan jelas.

示例: I prefer urban views because cities are full of lights and interesting architecture. For example, at night the illuminated buildings and busy streets create dramatic scenes that are fun to photograph.

建议: Perbaiki grammar (plural/singular, preposisi), buat pernyataan langsung lalu beri alasan spesifik tanpa merendahkan negara sendiri. Gunakan variasi kosa kata (e.g., modern, vibrant, historic) dan berikan contoh jelas tentang apa yang Anda suka fotografi.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I find their cities more modern and varied. For instance, I enjoy photographing bright cityscapes with tall skyscrapers and lively streets, which offer more photographic variety than the simpler buildings at home.

× I like taking pictures of different fields. Why? Because I interested in photography and I like different fields, for example the natural or the cute animal. Because I like photography and I like take picture about anything different feels.

✓ I like taking pictures of different subjects. Why? Because I am interested in photography and I like different subjects, for example natural scenes or cute animals. I like photography and I like to take pictures of anything that feels unique.

Errors involve missing auxiliary verb and incorrect verb form (present tense 'am interested' required), incorrect noun choice ('fields'→'subjects' or 'scenes'), incorrect infinitive use ('like to take'), and awkward phrasing. Use the verb 'be' + past participle for states (am interested) and use 'like to + base verb' for preferences. Choose correct nouns and add relative pronoun 'that' for clarity.

× I prefer fuse the rural areas. Why? Because the rural areas is the modern and so many light in the city when already night and the fuse is so many like you can feel the building or the aesthetic life.

✓ I prefer rural areas. Why? Because the rural areas are more peaceful and there are many lights in the city at night, and the atmosphere is varied so you can appreciate the buildings and the aesthetic lifestyle.

Errors include incorrect word choice ('fuse' is wrong), subject-verb agreement ('areas are' not 'areas is'), incorrect quantifier/phrase ('so many light'→'many lights'), wrong time expression ('when already night'→'at night'), and awkward use of 'fuse'/'so many like'. Use plural verbs with plural nouns and correct quantifiers. Replace incorrect words with 'atmosphere' or 'varied' for clarity.

× I prefer views on another countries because another country is more modern and the picture is really good. Not in my country that is only the basic building and I don't interested. And in the another country the bright city is really good and the tall buildings also.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because other countries are more modern and the scenery is really good. Not in my country; it only has basic buildings and I am not interested. In those other countries the bright cities are impressive and there are tall buildings too.

Errors include incorrect preposition ('on another countries'→'in other countries'), singular/plural mismatch ('another country is' vs 'other countries are'), missing auxiliary verb ('I am not interested'), article misuse ('the another country'→'those other countries'), and noun agreement ('building'→'buildings'). Use correct prepositions for locations, match singular/plural between subject and verb, and include 'be' for states.