视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural and relevant, but shorten and tighten it to avoid repetition and improve grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid phrases like “I'm going to any places” and double words (“I I”).

示例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I walk around my city I often stop to photograph interesting buildings or parks because I enjoy preserving small moments and details.

建议: Good clear preference, but fix grammar and be more specific with one concrete reason. Use a linking word (e.g., because, although) and avoid vague phrases like “a lot of beautiful landscapes” by naming an example feature.

示例: I prefer rural areas because they have open landscapes such as rolling hills and rivers, which make it easier to photograph natural light and wide panoramas, whereas tall city buildings can block nice views.

建议: Your answer communicates the idea but contains grammatical errors and repetition. Start with a concise topic sentence, correct mistakes (e.g., “never traveled outside my country”), and give one specific example that supports your preference. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad and Nepal already offers spectacular scenery; for instance, the mountain ranges, alpine lakes and winding rivers provide diverse photo opportunities.

× Whenever I'm walking around my city or I'm going to any places and I see a beautiful place, I capture it quickly.

✓ Whenever I'm walking around my city or going to any places and I see a beautiful place, I capture it quickly.

The original sentence repeats the auxiliary 'I'm' unnecessarily before 'going'. In coordination with 'walking' the correct form is 'going' without a repeated 'I'm'. Use parallel structure: 'I'm walking... or going...' or 'walking... or going...' To improve, keep parallel verbs with the same auxiliary or remove the extra auxiliary: 'Whenever I'm walking around my city or going to any places...'. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× However, in urban spaces they there is higher buildings and skylines so you cannot capture the beauty of the scene easily.

✓ However, in urban areas there are taller buildings and skylines, so you cannot capture the beauty of the scene easily.

Errors: 'they there is' is ungrammatical and 'higher buildings' is awkward; we need plural agreement 'there are' with plural 'buildings'. Also 'urban spaces' is less natural than 'urban areas' and 'taller' is the correct comparative for buildings. Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence with plural noun and correct adjective: 'there are taller buildings'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Since I've never visited out of my country, I I'm definitely inclined to picking my own country.

✓ Since I've never traveled outside my country, I'm definitely inclined to choose my own country.

Problems: 'visited out of my country' is incorrect preposition and verb choice—use 'traveled outside' or 'left' the country. 'Inclined to picking' mixes 'inclined to' with a gerund; after 'inclined to' use the infinitive 'choose' or restructure 'inclined toward choosing'. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggest: 'Since I've never traveled outside my country, I'm definitely inclined to choose my own country.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× There is a lot of beautiful scenarios and landscapes that you can see in Nepal.

✓ There are many beautiful scenes and landscapes that you can see in Nepal.

Errors: 'There is' does not agree with plural 'scenarios and landscapes'—use 'There are' (also singular/plural issue). 'A lot of' before plural is acceptable but 'many' is more natural here; 'scenarios' is not the correct noun for natural views—use 'scenes'. Suggestion: use 'There are many beautiful scenes and landscapes'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× There are mountain ranges and lakes and rivers that you can go to.

✓ There are mountain ranges, lakes, and rivers that you can visit.

The phrase 'that you can go to' is informal and repetitive. Use a more natural verb 'visit' after listing places. Also include commas for list clarity. This keeps plural agreement with 'There are'. Grammar problem type ID: 1