视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms, and finish with a specific reason or example. Use one or two linking words if adding detail. Keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I travel, I usually take many pictures because they help me capture memories and details I might forget later. For example, I photograph landscapes and street scenes to remember the atmosphere of a place.

建议: Give a clear direct answer then support it with specific reasons and one example. Reduce hesitations and filler words, use correct adjectives and simple linking phrases like 'because' or 'for example.' Keep to a maximum of five sentences.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and relaxing. For example, I enjoy wide open fields and quiet rivers, which make me feel calm after a busy week in the city.

建议: Answer directly and use correct comparative phrasing. Provide specific details about what you like in your country and a brief reason or example. Avoid fragmented sentences and be concise.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has diverse and beautiful scenery. For instance, the coastline, terraced rice fields and mountain landscapes offer a variety of photo opportunities that I really enjoy.

× Yes, I really like taking photos because when I go out or traveling, I'm usually take a lot of picture because I I think that when I take picture I can capturing a lot of.

✓ Yes, I really like taking photos because when I go out or travel, I usually take a lot of pictures, because I think that when I take pictures I can capture a lot.

Errors: incorrect gerund/infinitive pair ('go out or traveling' should be parallel: 'go out or travel'); incorrect auxiliary use and verb form ('I'm usually take' should be 'I usually take'); plural noun missing ('picture' should be 'pictures'); wrong verb form after 'can' ('can capturing' should be 'can capture'). Suggestion: keep parallel structures ('go out or travel'), use correct subject + adverb + verb order ('I usually take'), ensure noun plurality matches context ('pictures'), and after modal verbs use base form ('can capture').

× I think I, I like uh, rural area because when I, when I in uh, rural areas, I, I like very, very uh, and wise and relaxing. So in the rural.

✓ I think I like rural areas because when I'm in rural areas, I feel very peaceful and relaxed.

Errors: incorrect article and singular/plural use ('rural area' vs 'rural areas'); missing verb 'am' in 'when I in'; awkward adjective use ('wise and relaxing' is incorrect). Suggestions: use plural 'rural areas' for general preference, include correct form of 'be' ('I'm in'), and choose appropriate adjectives ('peaceful' and 'relaxed') to express feeling. Also remove filler words and redundant phrases.

× Actually, I refer my country instead of other countries because in my country, Vietnamese, Vietnam, there's a lot of scenery where very beautiful and.

✓ Actually, I prefer my own country to other countries because in Vietnam there are many beautiful sceneries.

Errors: wrong verb ('refer' should be 'prefer'); pronoun/article issues ('my country' fine but 'prefer my own country to other countries' is natural); incorrect insertion of 'Vietnamese, Vietnam'; 'there's' with plural 'scenery' is mismatched and 'scenery' countable usage unclear. Suggestions: use 'prefer' for preference, use 'prefer A to B' structure, use 'Vietnam' without redundant adjectives, and match 'there are' with plural noun 'many beautiful sceneries' or use uncountable 'beautiful scenery' with 'a lot of'. Also avoid unfinished sentence fragments.