视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, avoid filler sounds (e.g., “MMM”), vary sentence structure, and use more precise vocabulary (for example, say “I always carry my camera” instead of “have my own camera”). Also add one brief specific example or a reason why you enjoy landscape photography to make the answer more vivid.

示例: Yes, definitely. I'm a big fan of photography and I always carry my camera when I travel or go out with friends. I enjoy capturing landscapes because they help me remember the light and mood of a place; for example, I once photographed a misty sunrise over a lake and the photo still reminds me of that peaceful morning.

建议: The answer directly addresses the question and gives reasons, but the language has some grammatical slips and informal phrasing. Improve by using correct comparative structures, removing redundancy, and adding a linking word to contrast cities and countryside. Be more specific about what in rural views you like (e.g., mountains, fields, quieter atmosphere).

示例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I love natural landscapes like rolling hills and quiet forests. Although cities are interesting and busy, the peaceful atmosphere and open skies in the countryside help me relax and unwind.

建议: The answer is relevant and includes a personal example, which is good. Improve grammar (use “seen” not “met” for scenery), avoid repeating phrases (“never seen before” twice), and combine sentences with linking words to sound more fluent. Provide one specific detail about the example to make it more memorable (colour, shape, contrast).

示例: I definitely prefer views in other countries because they offer landscapes I haven't seen at home. For instance, in Santorini I photographed the dramatic white houses against deep blue sea and sky — a contrast I had never experienced before and still inspires me.

× I enjoy capturing landscapes which make me memorize the atmosphere of each occasion.

✓ I enjoy capturing landscapes which help me remember the atmosphere of each occasion.

The verb 'make' + object + verb requires the base form (make me remember) but the intended meaning is better expressed with 'help me remember'. Also 'memorize' is not natural here; 'remember' fits context. Use 'help' + base verb or 'make me remember'.

× I always have my own camera when I go to travel abroad or hang out with my friends.

✓ I always have my own camera when I travel abroad or hang out with my friends.

The verb 'go to travel' is ungrammatical; use 'travel' without 'go to'. 'When I travel abroad' is the correct phrasing.

× I prefer views in rural areas to urban areas because there are beautiful nature scenes.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because there are beautiful natural scenes.

Compare two noun phrases: use 'those in urban areas' to avoid repetition. 'Nature scenes' is awkward; the adjective 'natural' with 'scenes' is correct.

× but nature scenes made me feel more relaxed.

✓ but nature scenes make me feel more relaxed.

The rest of the answer is in present habitual tense (I prefer, I think), so use present simple 'make' not past 'made'. Subject-verb agreement: 'scenes make'.

× I prefer views in other countries definitely because I can see the scenery that I'd never met before.

✓ I definitely prefer views in other countries because I can see scenery I had never seen before.

'Met' is used with people, not scenery. Use 'seen' for sights. Also place adverb 'definitely' before the verb for natural word order and use past perfect 'had never seen' when referring to an experience prior to another past reference.

× So when I went to Santorini in Greece, there was a beautiful coastal scene that I'd never seen before.

✓ So when I went to Santorini in Greece, there was a beautiful coastal scene that I had never seen before.

The contraction 'I'd' can be ambiguous; expand to 'I had' to show past perfect. Past perfect 'had never seen' correctly shows the scene was new to the speaker before that past trip.