视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar (singular/plural, articles, verb forms), use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it natural and concise (max 4–5 sentences). Include a brief reason and an example to make the answer specific.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I go sightseeing, I usually take several photos to remember the place because photos help me recall the atmosphere. For example, last month I photographed the city skyline at sunset to capture the colours and mood.

建议: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons using linking words (because, therefore, for example). Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles, adjective forms) and avoid unclear phrases like “red air.” Limit to 3–4 sentences with precise details (pollution, scenery, noise, space).

示例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is quieter and the air is cleaner. For example, I enjoy wide fields and clear skies where I can see mountains in the distance. In contrast, cities often feel crowded and smoky, which makes outdoor photos less pleasant.

建议: Give a clear answer (own country or other countries) and support it with specific reasons and an example. Fix vocabulary errors (“wheels” → “views”), grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), and remove irrelevant or confusing phrases. Use 2–3 coherent sentences with linking words like “because” and “for example.”

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the culture and landscapes. For example, Vietnam has beautiful places such as Ha Long Bay, where the limestone islands create stunning coastal scenery. I also enjoy exploring local towns that foreigners rarely visit.

× I'm into taking picture of different view.

✓ I'm into taking pictures of different views.

Plural nouns are required after 'taking' when referring generally to multiple items. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' and 'view' should be plural 'views' to match the intended meaning; also 'into' + verb-ing is correct. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally about multiple items.

× Whenever I go sightseeing I often take picture a few.

✓ Whenever I go sightseeing I often take a few pictures.

The phrase 'take a few pictures' requires the quantifier 'a few' before the plural noun 'pictures'. Word order was incorrect. Suggestion: place quantifier before the noun and use the plural form 'pictures'.

× I think it's a good way to keep memory of something.

✓ I think it's a good way to keep a memory of something.

The noun 'memory' needs an article here: 'a memory' is idiomatic for preserving a specific memory. Alternatively, use 'keep memories' or 'keep a memory' depending on singular/plural meaning. Suggestion: use 'a memory' or plural 'memories' for general meaning.

× For me I prefer rural area, nice day.

✓ For me, I prefer rural areas on a nice day.

Use plural 'rural areas' for general preference and the preposition 'on' before 'a nice day' to indicate time. Also add a comma after 'For me' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'rural areas' and 'on a nice day'.

× Urban area is very polluted with smoke and rural area have a big full and beautiful view with red air.

✓ Urban areas are very polluted with smoke and rural areas have big, full and beautiful views with fresh air.

Subject-verb agreement and pluralization: use plural 'areas' with plural verbs 'are' and 'have'. 'Big full' is awkward; use 'big, full and beautiful views'. 'Red air' is incorrect collocation — likely meant 'fresh air'. Suggestion: pluralize nouns and match verbs; choose appropriate adjectives and collocations (e.g., 'fresh air').

× So rural area is my choice.

✓ So rural areas are my choice.

When speaking generally, use plural 'rural areas' with plural verb 'are' to maintain agreement. Alternatively, 'So the rural area is my choice' if referring to a specific area. Suggestion: use plural for general statements.

× I prefer wheels in my own country because I'm a Vietnamese resident.

✓ I prefer travels in my own country because I'm a Vietnamese resident.

The word 'wheels' is incorrect here; likely the student meant 'travels' or 'traveling'. Pronoun 'my' is fine. Suggestion: use 'travel' or 'travels' to express preference for domestic travel.

× I love my country so much and my country have some beautiful destination like Halong Bay.

✓ I love my country so much and my country has some beautiful destinations like Ha Long Bay.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my country' (singular) requires 'has' not 'have'. 'Destination' should be plural 'destinations' when referring to multiple places. Suggestion: use 'has' and pluralize 'destinations'; also spell 'Ha Long Bay' conventionally.

× My my Aunt Martin.

✓ My aunt, Mary, lives there.

The original fragment 'My my Aunt Martin.' is ungrammatical and unclear. It likely attempted to mention a relative living in the country. Provide a complete sentence with subject and verb, correcting name and duplication. Suggestion: always write a full sentence with a subject and verb; avoid repeated words and ensure names are correct.