视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên, ngữ pháp và chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'different view' -> 'different views'; 'lots of less beautiful landscape' không chính xác). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, đưa câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích chụp (ví dụ: bãi biển, núi, phố cổ) dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. In Vietnam, I especially like photographing coastal scenes and mountain landscapes because the light at sunrise creates dramatic colours. Taking pictures helps me remember the feeling of a place and share it with friends.

建议: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và hoàn chỉnh câu. Tránh tiếng 'ums' và lặp từ ('I I'). Nên nêu rõ lựa chọn, giải thích bằng một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể, và kết luận so sánh bằng liên từ như 'however' hoặc 'although' với câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: To be honest, I prefer urban views because I enjoy the skyline and tall buildings which look impressive, especially at night. However, rural views are more peaceful and relaxing, so sometimes I choose the countryside when I want quiet and nature.

建议: Cải thiện sự rõ ràng và ngữ pháp. Tránh nói lúng túng và câu rườm rà; trả lời trực tiếp (own country or other countries), đưa lý do rõ ràng và một ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng trình tự logic: câu chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ + kết luận.

示例: I prefer the views in my own country because Vietnam has diverse scenery, from dramatic rice terraces to picturesque coastlines. For example, Ha Long Bay's limestone karsts are unique, so I often choose to photograph local landscapes.

× I like taking pictures of different view because you know, in Vietnam there are lots of less beautiful landscape.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because, you know, in Vietnam there are many less-beautiful landscapes.

The sentence omits plural and articles: 'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'different', and 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'. Also 'lots of less beautiful landscape' is unidiomatic; use 'many less-beautiful landscapes'. Suggestion: use plural nouns with quantifiers and hyphenate compound adjective 'less-beautiful'.

× So I think taking picture is a good way to keep things in memory.

✓ So I think taking pictures is a good way to keep things in memory.

Count noun 'picture' needs plural 'pictures' after 'taking' when talking about the activity in general. Use plural for general habits: 'taking pictures'.

× I I prefer most view in urban area you can see a lot of high building.

✓ I prefer most views in urban areas; you can see a lot of tall buildings there.

Several tense/number issues: 'prefer most view' is ungrammatical—use 'prefer most views' or better 'I mostly prefer views in urban areas'. 'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match general statement. 'High building' should be plural 'tall buildings' (adjective 'tall' is more natural). Also sentence run-on: split or use a connector.

× However in the rural area some it can be more peaceful and.

✓ However, in rural areas it can be more peaceful.

Preposition/article issues: 'in the rural area' is awkward for general meaning—use 'in rural areas'. Remove extra pronoun 'some it' and trailing 'and'. Keep sentence concise: 'it can be more peaceful.'

× Honestly, I really, I, I'm working on traveling, so that's I tend to use to answer this question is maybe difficult, but uh, in I really love my country.

✓ Honestly, I like traveling, so answering this question is difficult, but I really love my country.

Tense and phrasing are awkward: 'I'm working on traveling' is unnatural—use 'I like traveling' or 'I enjoy traveling'. Remove extraneous fillers and incorrect construction 'that's I tend to use to answer this question'. Simplify to 'so answering this question is difficult'.

× So that's, I think the view in my country is really beauty.

✓ So I think the views in my country are really beautiful.

Adjective/adverb error: 'beauty' is a noun; use adjective 'beautiful' to describe 'views'. Also match number: 'views... are'. Prefer plural 'views' for general statements.