视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it has hesitations ('well', 'uh') and some redundancy (repeating 'different' and 'I really do'). To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give one specific supporting detail (what you photograph and why). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain landscapes because their colors and moods change quickly and I want to remember those moments.

建议: Good direct response with a reason, but avoid repetition ('really, really') and expand slightly with a specific example to strengthen your answer. Use a linking phrase to connect the reason to an example.

示例: I prefer rural views because I love nature and quiet surroundings. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice terraces and small forests where I can focus on details without crowds interrupting me.

建议: Your response answers the question but is disorganized, contains hesitations and repetition, and ends abruptly. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence (I like both), then contrast with one specific detail for each (what you like about home and abroad). Avoid trailing off and check sentence completion.

示例: I like views in both my country and abroad. At home in the Philippines I appreciate tropical beaches and lush forests, while abroad I enjoy snowy mountain scenes because I rarely see snow here and I find it fascinating.

× Well, I do like taking pictures of different views because I really do love to keep memories from, uh, different scenarios, different nature views or the things that I love to watch with my very own eyes.

✓ Well, I do like taking pictures of different views because I really love keeping memories of different scenes, natural views, or the things I love to see with my own eyes.

The original contains awkward or incorrect uses of verb forms and prepositions: 'love to keep memories from' is not natural English; 'keep memories of' or 'keep memories' with a noun is better and 'keeping' is a gerund matching 'love'. 'Different scenarios' is improved to 'different scenes' for clarity. 'The things that I love to watch with my very own eyes' is wordy; use 'the things I love to see with my own eyes'. Use of gerund ('keeping') is correct after 'love' when emphasizing the action as a noun phrase. Suggestion: prefer 'love keeping' or 'love to keep' with correct preposition 'of' and simplify wordy phrases.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I really, really love nature and I don't normally love crowded places.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I really love nature and I don't normally like crowded places.

The verb 'love' is semantically strong and collocates awkwardly with 'not normally'; 'like' is the appropriate verb to express a milder preference in negative form. This is a word choice issue tied to modal/attitudinal nuance; replace 'love' with 'like' after a negation for natural meaning. Also remove the repeated 'really' for conciseness.

× Well, basically I love both. I love the views in my own country, which is here in the Philippines. We are very, very rich in nature. But I also love in the other countries too. I love that they experience snow there, which it didn't happen here in the Philippines and.

✓ Well, basically I love both. I love the views in my own country, the Philippines; we are very rich in natural scenery. But I also love the views in other countries. I like that they experience snow there, which doesn't happen here in the Philippines.

There are multiple issues: 'which is here in the Philippines' is wordy—use 'the Philippines' apposition. 'We are very, very rich in nature' is awkward; 'rich in natural scenery' is clearer. 'But I also love in the other countries too' is ungrammatical: 'love' needs an object—use 'love the views in other countries.' The clause 'which it didn't happen here in the Philippines and.' is ungrammatical and redundant; correct to 'which doesn't happen here in the Philippines.' Use present simple 'doesn't happen' to state a general fact. Suggestions: ensure verbs have objects, avoid redundant words, and use correct tense for general truths.