视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more grammatical, concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, use correct verb forms and plural/singular forms, and add one specific detail to support your idea. Use linking words like “for example” or “because” to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I travel often. For example, when I visit mountain areas I photograph the landscapes and sunrise, which helps me remember the trip. I also take cityscape shots to capture local architecture.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence and complete your thought. Avoid vague phrases and repetition, check grammar (subject-verb agreement) and finish sentences. Use linking words like “however” or “on the other hand” to contrast urban and rural preferences, and provide one specific reason and brief example for each.

示例: I prefer both urban and rural views depending on my mood. For example, I enjoy city views at night because the illuminated skyscrapers look dramatic; however, I also like rural scenes for their peacefulness and natural beauty, such as quiet lakes and green fields.

建议: Answer directly and accurately (country vs city). Reduce filler words and correct vocabulary (e.g., “BC” is a province, not a city). Give a specific reason and one concrete example. Keep responses to no more than five sentences and use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I’m familiar with the landscapes and find them very beautiful. For example, in British Columbia there are majestic mountains and coastal scenes that I love to photograph, especially at sunset when the light is warm.

× Yes, I like take pictures of different views because sometime I travel, travel and uh, I click pictures of uh, landscaping mountains.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views because sometimes when I travel I take pictures of landscapes and mountains.

Error type relates to incorrect verb form after 'like' and other grammar: after verbs like 'like' we use the infinitive 'to take' or the gerund 'taking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency) and 'landscaping mountains' is incorrect collocation; use 'landscapes and mountains'. Also avoid repetition and filler words. Suggestion: use 'I like to take' or 'I like taking', 'sometimes', and 'landscapes.'

× It's very beautiful views and uh, and uh, it is very memorable things to take pic.

✓ They are very beautiful views, and they are very memorable to photograph.

This sentence has article/number and pronoun issues (Grammar Problem Types 1 and 22): 'It's' (singular) does not agree with plural 'views'; use 'They are' or rephrase. 'Memorable things' is awkward; use 'memorable' as adjective referring to the experience or 'memories'. 'Take pic' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'photograph' or 'take pictures'. Suggestion: match subject number and use correct noun forms.

× Yes, I prefer both of you.

✓ Yes, I prefer both of them.

Incorrect pronoun use (Grammar Problem Type 12): 'both of you' addresses the examiner(s) which is not intended; use 'both of them' to refer to urban and rural areas. Suggestion: use 'both' with correct object pronoun 'them' or simply 'I like both.'

× Sometime it's depends on my mood.

✓ Sometimes it depends on my mood.

This combines adverb frequency and subject-verb agreement errors (Grammar Problem Types 6 and 27): 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' and 'it's depends' is wrong because 'depends' already carries the verb; use 'it depends'. Suggestion: 'Sometimes it depends on my mood.'

× Sometime I see buildings at night time it's like a lightning to all the buildings buildings and sometime I prefer to view the rural areas because I.

✓ Sometimes I see buildings at night; the lights make the buildings look spectacular, and sometimes I prefer views of rural areas because...

Multiple issues: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (Grammar Problem Type 6), 'it's like a lightning to all the buildings' is incorrect use of nouns and articles (Grammar Problem Types 11 and 17) and word choice—use 'lights' not 'lightning', and avoid repeating 'buildings'. The fragment ending with 'because I.' is a sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: rewrite into complete sentence, use 'lights' and correct articles/plural forms.

× Actually I live in Canada, so I prefer to be in my own country.

✓ Actually, I live in Canada, so I prefer to be in my own country.

Minor punctuation; grammatically acceptable though 'be in my own country' is slightly odd but allowable. No change needed except comma after 'Actually'. This maps to preposition/article issue (Grammar Problem Type 11/22) but sentence is correct; suggestion: you can say 'I prefer to stay in my own country' for clarity.

× Uh, it's a very beautiful city like BC.

✓ BC is a very beautiful place.

Incorrect article and classification (Grammar Problem Types 17 and 13): British Columbia (BC) is a province, not a 'city'; saying 'it's a very beautiful city like BC' is wrong. Suggestion: say 'BC is a very beautiful place' or 'British Columbia is very beautiful.'

× Uh, so there is too many views like mountains are very beautiful at night time.

✓ There are so many views; the mountains are very beautiful at night.

Subject-verb agreement and 'there is' usage error (Grammar Problem Types 3 and 27): 'There is' should be 'There are' to match plural 'views'. 'Too many' implies excess; use 'so many' or 'a lot of'. Also split into two clauses for clarity. Suggestion: 'There are so many great views; the mountains are very beautiful at night.'

× So I prefer to view in my own country.

✓ So I prefer to view scenes in my own country.

Verb and preposition choice issue (Grammar Problem Types 11 and 8): 'prefer to view in my own country' is vague; use 'view scenes in' or 'see views in'. Also ensure infinitive 'to view' is followed by object. Suggestion: 'I prefer to see views in my own country.'