视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details (where/when you take photos and why). Use simple linking words and avoid unnecessary words. Focus on correct verb forms and word choices (e.g., "I like taking photos of different views when I travel or meet friends").

示例: Yes — I enjoy taking photos of different views. I usually take pictures when I travel or hang out with friends because I want to remember the places I visit. For example, on my last trip to a mountain town I took several landscape shots that remind me of the scenery.

建议: Answer the question directly and clearly: state your preference, and give two concise, specific reasons linked logically. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases (e.g., "90 skating views"). Use linking words like "because" or "especially" and correct word forms (architecture, lighting).

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and the artificial lighting at night. For example, city rooftops and illuminated buildings make me feel energetic and inspired, so I often take photos there.

建议: Give a direct answer followed by two specific reasons and one example. Correct vocabulary (coast, mountains) and grammar (present simple, avoid hesitations). Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" and "for example" to make it coherent.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because we have a variety of landscapes, from beautiful coasts to high mountains. For example, there are several national parks I haven't visited yet but hope to see soon, so I often recommend domestic travel to friends.

× Definitely I do like to taking pictures different views whenever when I usually go any your hair like traveling or visiting with friend.

✓ Definitely I like taking pictures of different views whenever I travel or visit friends.

The original sentence contains incorrect use of 'to taking' (should be 'taking' after 'like') and extra words ('when', 'usually', 'any', 'your hair') that confuse meaning. Also missing preposition 'of' after 'pictures' and plural 'friends'. Suggestion: use 'I like taking pictures of different views whenever I travel or visit friends' to use the correct verb+ -ing form and natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× This time I track fixer and this photo Remember Me where I went is really great for me.

✓ This time I took pictures, and the photo titled 'Remember Me' of where I went is really special to me.

The original uses 'track fixer' (nonsense) and has unclear noun phrases. 'Took pictures' is past tense of 'take'. Also need conjunction and clearer noun phrase: 'the photo titled Remember Me of where I went' or 'the photo called Remember Me of the place I visited'. Suggest breaking into clear clauses and using past tense for completed actions. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I definitely, uh, prefer urban views, especially in 90 skating views and also all the architects, uh, there is really tremendous lighting system.

✓ I definitely prefer urban views, especially skyline views, and the architecture there has a really tremendous lighting system.

Original has 'there is' followed by plural 'architects' and awkward '90 skating' likely intended 'skyline'. Use subject-verb agreement: 'the architecture there has' or 'there are really tremendous lighting systems'. Also correct vocabulary and pluralization. This addresses third-person singular agreement and noun phrase errors. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I also like rooftop view. Just give me energy and also I enjoy myself.

✓ I also like rooftop views. They energize me, and I enjoy myself there.

Use plural 'rooftop views' and replace vague 'Just give me energy' with a subject 'They energize me'. Also add 'there' to clarify location for 'enjoy myself'. Pronoun 'they' refers to 'rooftop views'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I definitely prefer my country views, especially my country ha have different kinds of uh, spectacular and beautiful, uh, wash and mountain, and there is a lot of place I. I do not visit yet, but I hope I will go visit very soon, so I personally recommend my country.

✓ I definitely prefer views in my country, which has many kinds of spectacular and beautiful beaches and mountains, and there are many places I have not visited yet, but I hope to visit soon, so I personally recommend my country.

Original contains pronoun and verb errors: 'my country ha have' should be 'my country has'; 'wash' likely 'beaches'; 'a lot of place' should be 'many places'; 'I do not visit yet' should be 'I have not visited yet'; 'I hope I will go visit' is wordy—use 'I hope to visit'. Correct pronouns and verb forms improve clarity and grammaticality. Grammar problem type ID: 12}]} PMID:0001