视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce fillers (“uh”, “umm”) and correct basic grammar (e.g., “I like taking photos of people in the street” and “people’s faces are interesting”).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph people in the street because their expressions tell stories about daily life, and these candid shots capture interesting details about culture and emotion.

建议: Answer directly with correct grammar and one clear reason, then add a brief supporting detail. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.” Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (use past simple or present perfect correctly).

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and find natural landscapes more peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and rivers since they offer varied textures and natural colours.

建议: Make a clear, direct statement and give a specific reason with improved word choice. Replace incorrect words (e.g., “loaned” → “learn about”) and simplify the sentence. Use one linking word like “because” and provide a short example.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I can learn about new cultures and see different architecture. For instance, photographing markets abroad often reveals colourful scenes and unique traditions that I don’t find at home.

× Yes, I like uh, taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

Remove filler words like 'uh' for clarity. The verb + -ing form 'taking' is correct after 'like', so no grammatical change is needed; just make the sentence concise and fluent.

× Umm and sometimes I like it's just I like take photos of people in street at this day people faces interesting, then gives a lot of information.

✓ Sometimes I like to take photos of people in the street because their faces are interesting and give a lot of information.

Multiple issues: 'like it's just I like' is redundant and unclear; use 'like to take' or 'like taking' (infinitive or -ing). 'in street' needs the definite article 'the'. 'at this day' is incorrect; use no phrase or 'these days'. 'people faces' requires possessive: 'their faces'. Verb agreement: 'gives' should be 'give' because the subject 'faces' is plural. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns, articles, and subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer to or rural areas because I am grow up in countryside also or oral area shows more natural natural than city area so I prepare in.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside, and rural areas are more natural than cities, so I prefer them.

Problems addressed: 'prefer to or rural areas' is unclear; use 'prefer rural areas'. 'I am grow up' is wrong tense and form: use past tense 'I grew up'. 'in countryside' needs the article 'the countryside'. 'oral area' is a misspelling of 'rural area'. 'shows more natural natural' should be 'are more natural' and avoid repetition. 'city area' is better as 'cities'. 'so I prepare in' is incorrect; use 'so I prefer them'. Corrections fix prepositions, articles, tense, and word choice.

× I prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This is actually the examiner's question; present tense 'prefer' is fine. No change required for tense, but ensure correct question form 'Do you prefer...' when asked. If intended as student response, answer should reflect preference: 'I prefer views in other countries.'

× I like more other countries because I loaned new culture and new things, so I prepared to taking is in foreigner countries. Sometimes I.

✓ I prefer other countries because I learn about new cultures and new things, so I like taking photos in foreign countries.

Multiple errors: 'I like more other countries' should be 'I prefer other countries'. 'loaned' is incorrect; use 'learn'. 'new culture' should be plural 'new cultures' or 'a new culture' depending on context. 'so I prepared to taking is in foreigner countries' is ungrammatical: use 'so I like taking photos in foreign countries'. 'foreigner' is incorrect adjective; use 'foreign'. The correction fixes pronouns, verb choice, verb forms, and word order.