视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, fakat dilbilgisi hataları, gereksiz tekrarlar ve akıcılık eksikliği var. Cümleleri daha doğal yapmak için özne-yüklem uyumuna dikkat edin (ör. “My wife and I” yerine “Me and my wife”), gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın. Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümle kuralına uyarak daha kısa ve net cevaplar verin. Öneriler: (1) Giriş cümlesiyle doğrudan cevap verin; (2) Bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin; (3) Kısa bir sonuç veya örnekle bitirin.

示例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I travel frequently. My wife and I often visit other countries, and we always take photos to remember our trips. For example, we like capturing city skylines and local architecture when we travel.

建议: Cevap net değil ve çok tekrar, dolayısıyla akıcılık ve dilbilgisi zayıf. Konuyu doğrudan belirtin, tekrar eden dolgu kelimelerinden (uh, like) kaçının, özne-yüklem uyumuna dikkat edin ve gerekirse kısa bir neden verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri mantıklı sıraya koyun. Öneriler: (1) “I prefer…” ile başlayın; (2) Bir sebep verin; (3) Kısa örnekle destekleyin.

示例: I prefer urban views because cities offer interesting architecture and lively streets. For example, in Tokyo I enjoy photographing modern buildings and busy markets, which create dynamic photos.

建议: Cevap makul içeriğe sahip ama yine dolgu sözcükleri, tekrarlamalar ve dilbilgisi sorunları dikkat çekiyor. Tercihinizi net söyleyin, nedenini kısaça açıklayın ve bir örnek veya gelecek planı ekleyin. Spesifik detaylar (örneğin hangi tür manzaralar, hangi şehirler) konuşmayı zenginleştirir. Öneriler: (1) Net bir başlangıç cümlesi kurun; (2) Bir veya iki spesifik neden verin; (3) Kısa örnek ya da plan ekleyin.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many varied landscapes and familiar cultural sites. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries for historic landmarks; for instance, I would love to photograph the ancient monuments in Egypt on my next trip.

× Me and my wife usually go abroad and in there we always take a photo.

✓ My wife and I usually go abroad and we always take photos there.

Use 'My wife and I' instead of 'Me and my wife' because the subject form 'I' is correct in subject position. Place the pronoun phrase before the verb. Use 'there' after the verb phrase for natural word order. Use plural 'photos' if more than one photo is implied.

× I could choose urban areas, uh, because urban areas, uh, is better for my opinion opinion.

✓ I could choose urban areas because urban areas are better in my opinion.

The subject 'urban areas' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Use the phrase 'in my opinion' rather than 'for my opinion' and remove the repeated word 'opinion'.

× Uh, my wife and I, uh, always take photo in urban areas.

✓ My wife and I always take photos in urban areas.

Use the plural noun 'photos' or add an article with singular 'a photo'. 'Take photo' is ungrammatical; correct forms are 'take photos' or 'take a photo'.

× In my country, there is a lot of beautiful places and views.

✓ In my country, there are a lot of beautiful places and views.

The expression 'a lot of' can be followed by plural nouns; use the plural verb 'are' to agree with 'places and views' (there be agreement). Using 'is' with plural nouns is incorrect.

× It doesn't matter for me, but uh, I have to choose someone.

✓ It doesn't matter to me, but I have to choose one.

Use the preposition 'to' with 'matter' ('matter to me'). 'Someone' refers to a person; 'one' is appropriate for choosing between options. This fixes preposition choice and word selection.

× Uh, I would like to, uh, travel, uh, especially historical places like Egypt.

✓ I would like to travel, especially to historical places like Egypt.

After 'travel' use the preposition 'to' before a destination. 'Especially historical places' needs 'to' to indicate direction or destination. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.