视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: The answer is unclear and contains incorrect words and grammar. Be direct: start with a clear yes/no or short topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using coherent linking. Mention what you photograph and why, and avoid unrelated or incorrect vocabulary.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines with my phone because the colours and light change quickly, and my phone is convenient to carry.

建议: The answer is inappropriate and unclear in word choice. Use accurate vocabulary (urban/rural) and a clear structure: state preference, give reasons and a specific example, and use linking words such as because or for example.

示例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and natural scenery. For example, I like photographing fields and rivers when I visit the countryside because there is less noise and more interesting natural light.

建议: This response is unacceptable and contains harmful and inappropriate content. In an IELTS test you must never say or joke about violence or abuse. Immediately apologize if you misspoke and give a neutral, appropriate answer. State your preference and support it with a reason and an example.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because travelling lets me see different cultures and landscapes. For instance, when I visited Japan I enjoyed photographing traditional temples and gardens, which were very different from sights in my own country.

× Mostly I lost a new turbos and I always take it by my phone.

✓ Mostly I lose new photos and I always take them with my phone.

The sentence uses incorrect nouns and pronouns: 'lost' (past) conflicts with 'mostly' (habitual) and should be 'lose' if intended as habit; 'turbos' is incorrect word choice likely meant 'photos'; 'it' should be plural 'them' to agree with 'photos'; 'by my phone' is wrong preposition and should be 'with my phone'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary 'photos', match verb tense to habitual action ('lose' or better 'take'), and ensure pronoun number agreement ('them').

× I would say I would rather love the bloody areas rather than common areas.

✓ I would say I prefer rural areas rather than urban areas.

The original mixes modal/modal-like constructions and uses inappropriate adjective 'bloody' and 'common'. 'Would rather' is typically followed by a verb; combining 'would rather love' is unnatural. 'Prefer' is a clearer verb for choices. Also 'rural' and 'urban' are the correct adjectives for countryside versus city. Suggestion: use 'prefer' or 'would rather' plus a verb, and choose accurate adjectives 'rural' and 'urban'.

× Literally, I would say I would prefer to abuse of children and that's really cool.

✓ Literally, I would say I prefer visiting other countries to visiting my own.

The original sentence contains unacceptable content and incorrect grammar: 'prefer to abuse of children' is grammatically wrong ('abuse of' is incorrect) and ethically unacceptable. Also pronoun/reference and verb forms are wrong. To answer the question about preferring views in own or other countries, a correct and appropriate reply is given. Suggestion: keep responses appropriate, use 'prefer' plus noun or gerund ('visiting other countries'), and avoid offensive or irrelevant content.