视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ปรับไวยากรณ์และความเป็นธรรมชาติของประโยค เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ แล้วเสริมเหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้รูปแบบกริยาถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำ เช่น “taking pictures” ควรใช้รูปแบบเดียวกันและเติมคำอธิบายที่ชัดเจน เพิ่มคำเชื่อมเมื่อจำเป็น ตัวอย่างที่ควรแก้ไข: ใช้ ‘I like taking photos of different views because they make me feel refreshed and inspired.’

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me feel refreshed and inspired. For example, when I walk in the park I often stop to photograph interesting trees or a quiet pond, which helps me relax.

建议: แก้คำศัพท์ผิดและโครงสร้างประโยค เริ่มด้วยประโยคชัดเจนว่า ‘I prefer rural areas’ ตามด้วยเหตุผลที่เป็นรูปธรรม ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น ‘because’ และขยายความด้วยตัวอย่างหรือรายละเอียดเล็กน้อย หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำและรูปประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and relaxing. For instance, I enjoy looking at open fields and hills, which calm me down after a busy week in the city.

建议: ปรับไวยากรณ์เรื่อง tense และโครงสร้างประโยค ทำให้ชัดเจนว่าชอบวิวในประเทศของตัวเองและให้เหตุผลที่เป็นรูปธรรม ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น ‘because’ และแก้การใช้คำนามและคำกริยาให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ‘I have never been to another country’

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I have never been to other countries, so I appreciate the familiar landscapes. My country has many natural areas and diverse wildlife, like forests and birds, which I find beautiful.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because it's so fresh for me and taking picture make me can.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it's so refreshing for me and taking pictures makes me feel better.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes infinitive and -ing form; use 'like taking' or 'like to take'. 'Fresh' is not the correct adjective for this context; use 'refreshing'. 'Taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'. 'make me can' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me feel' + adjective or state (subject-verb agreement: 'taking pictures' is singular activity treated as singular, so 'makes'). Suggestion: use 'I like taking pictures' and 'makes me feel refreshed' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer wheels in rural areas because it's so relaxed and make me peaceful. Rural areas also have a. Nice view up.

✓ I prefer walks in rural areas because they're so relaxing and make me feel peaceful. Rural areas also have nice scenery.

'Wheels' is not appropriate; likely intended 'walks' or 'views' — here 'walks' fits context. 'It's so relaxed' uses 'it' and adjective incorrectly; reference should be plural 'they're' or use 'is relaxing' for activity. 'Make me peaceful' is missing 'feel'. 'A. Nice view up' is fragmented; replace with 'nice scenery' or 'nice views'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'walks... make' vs 'is relaxing'. Suggestion: choose correct noun and use 'relaxing' (adjective describing activity) and 'make me feel peaceful'.

× I prefer views in my country because I never been at a country before and I think my own country have a nice view because my country have a lot of nature and beautiful animal.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I have never been to other countries before, and I think my country has nice views because it has a lot of natural areas and beautiful animals.

Use present perfect 'have never been' with 'to' for visit: 'have never been to other countries'. 'At a country' is incorrect preposition and article. 'My own country have' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'my country has'. 'A lot of nature' is awkward; use 'a lot of natural areas' or 'lots of nature'. 'Beautiful animal' should be plural 'beautiful animals'. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experience, correct prepositions ('to'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and pluralize countable nouns.