视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và nên mở rộng nội dung bằng lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung lý do/chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: vì ánh sáng, vì khung cảnh, hoặc để lưu giữ kỷ niệm). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “capture”, “scenery”, “outfits” một cách tự nhiên.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it lets me capture both the scenery and my outfits. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to highlight the colors and my casual style. This helps me remember the places I visit and improves my photography skills.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng, tránh ngập ngừng và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Sử dụng liên từ như “because”, “for example” để kết nối ý và đưa chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: cánh đồng, núi, sự yên tĩnh). Tránh dùng từ không rõ như “big grounds” — thay bằng “open fields” hoặc “vast landscapes”. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: I prefer rural views because I love open fields and natural landscapes. For example, I enjoy walking through green pastures and forests because they feel peaceful and offer great backgrounds for photos. This quiet atmosphere also helps me relax and be more creative.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lý do cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và câu bỏ dở. Dùng liên từ để mở rộng (e.g., “because”, “for example”) và đưa chi tiết về trải nghiệm hoặc điều khác biệt giữa trong nước và nước ngoài (ví dụ: kiến trúc, văn hóa, phong cảnh mới lạ). Giữ câu gọn, tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because traveling allows me to experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, I love photographing historic architecture in Europe and colorful markets in Asia since they provide unique backdrops. These varied scenes inspire me and improve my travel photos.

× Actually, I like taking pictures of different views because this is the time for me to show my outfits and show a lot of my outfits.

✓ Actually, I like taking pictures of different views because it is a time for me to show my outfits and many of my outfits.

Student used 'this' ambiguously and repeated 'show my outfits'. Replace 'this' with 'it' to refer to the activity in general and remove repetition by saying 'many of my outfits'. Suggestion: use clear pronouns and avoid repeating the same noun; use 'it' to refer to a previously mentioned situation.

× Actually, I refer views in rural area because of the following reasons.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in rural areas for the following reasons.

The student used 'refer' instead of 'prefer' and omitted plural and the article for 'rural area'. Use 'prefer' to express choice, make 'rural areas' plural, and use 'for the following reasons' as the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: learn common verbs for preferences and ensure correct prepositions like 'for' in set phrases.

× First of all. In rural areas there are a lot of, uh, natural big grounds and umm, and.

✓ First of all, in rural areas there are a lot of large natural areas.

The phrase 'natural big grounds' is ungrammatical: 'ground' as countable/singular is awkward here and adjective order is wrong. Use plural 'areas' and adjective order 'large natural'. Also combine fragments into a full sentence. Suggestion: use 'large natural areas' or 'wide open spaces' to describe rural land.

× I prefer views in the other countries because this is a time for me to go abroad and also I really like traveling, so I prefer views in the other countries and you know in.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because it is a chance for me to go abroad and I really like traveling, so I prefer views in other countries.

Using 'the other countries' is incorrect when speaking generally; use 'other countries' without the definite article. 'This is a time for me' is better as 'it is a chance for me'. The sentence was also repetitive and unfinished; remove redundancy and complete the thought. Suggestion: avoid 'the' with plural nouns when meaning 'other countries' generally, and ensure sentences are complete.