视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and articles. Avoid redundant phrases like “to be honest with you” more than once and correct collocations (e.g. “keen on capturing”, “nature”, “children playing”).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice small details. For example, I often photograph coastal scenes — the waves, rocky cliffs and children playing on the beach — which capture lively moods and bright colors.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence naming your preference, then support it with specific, coherent reasons. Use correct articles and singular/plural forms (e.g. “taking pictures”, “there are”, “views I like”). Use a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example” to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

示例: I prefer views in urban areas because the city offers varied architecture and vibrant street scenes. For example, modern buildings, colorful murals and busy markets provide interesting shapes and contrasts that make my photos more dynamic.

建议: Answer the question directly, then explain briefly and specifically. Use correct verb tenses and pronouns (e.g. “prefer”, “post”, “people who are not in my country”). Avoid unclear phrases like “really prepare” — use “prefer” or “like”. Make the sentence coherent with a linking word such as “because”.

示例: I prefer taking views in my own country because I can capture familiar cultural scenes that interest visitors. For example, when I post photos of local festivals and landscapes, tourists and foreigners often comment and ask questions about where the photos were taken.

× To be honest with you, I'm keen on to capturing the view, even the natures and children's playing at the coast and it's really make me.

✓ To be honest with you, I'm keen on capturing views, even nature and children playing on the coast, and it really makes me happy.

Error types: incorrect use of verb + -ing after 'keen on' (should be 'keen on' + gerund), pluralization and article errors (natures -> nature; children's playing -> children playing), preposition use (at the coast -> on the coast), and subject-verb agreement (it's really make me -> it really makes me happy). Suggestion: after 'keen on' use a gerund without 'to'; use 'nature' as uncountable; use plural 'views' if general; use 'on the coast' and ensure verb agrees with subject 'it'.

× I prefer taking picture in urban areas because there there are several modern houses there and we have a views like more.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because there are several modern houses and we have more views I like.

Errors: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (singular/plural issue but corrected as part of phrase), unnecessary repeated 'there', incorrect article 'a views' (article error and plural), and awkward word order 'views like more'. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures', remove duplicate 'there', use plural 'views' without 'a', and place 'I like' after 'views' for correct word order.

× To be honest with you, I really prepare in my country because when I posting those pictures on social media, the other people who is not in my country, the tourists see my.

✓ To be honest with you, I really prefer my country because when I post those pictures on social media, people who are not in my country, such as tourists, can see them.

Errors: 'prepare' is incorrect verb choice — should be 'prefer' (present tense preference). 'when I posting' needs present simple 'when I post' (verb form), 'who is not in my country' should be 'who are not in my country' (pronoun-number agreement), and 'see my' is incomplete — should be 'see them'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preferences, use base form after subject 'I' for present simple, make plural agreement with 'people who are', and use the proper object pronoun 'them' for pictures.