视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and correct minor word choice errors (e.g., 'photo' → 'photography').

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different landscapes because experimenting with angles helps me find the best composition. For example, I often kneel or shoot from above to change the perspective, which has improved my photography skills.

建议: Make the response grammatically correct and add one specific reason with a linking word. Use present simple and avoid awkward phrasing ('the type of person that loving').

示例: I prefer urban views. I like the energy of cities because tall buildings, busy shops, and tree-lined avenues create interesting contrasts, so I always find new subjects to photograph.

建议: Be clearer and more specific. Correct grammar ('it give' → 'they give' or 'it gives') and avoid unrelated or incorrect words ('different planets'). Provide one or two concrete examples of what you notice abroad and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultural perspectives. For instance, foreign streets often have distinct architecture and local markets, and the food and people there inspire me to photograph scenes I never see at home.

× I love taking pictures of different fields, uh, because I think it's kind of trying different angles to make the perfect, uh, view of the object and, uh, it really helps me to learn more about, uh, photo.

✓ I love taking pictures of different places, because I think it's about trying different angles to make the perfect view of the subject, and it really helps me learn more about photography.

The phrase 'it's kind of trying' is awkward and ungrammatical; use 'it's about trying' to express purpose (verb + -ing form). 'Different fields' is better as 'different places' or 'locations' in this context. 'View of the object' should be 'view of the subject.' 'Learn more about photo' is incorrect; use the noun 'photography.' Suggestions: use 'about' + verb-ing for purpose and correct collocations: 'places', 'subject', 'photography'.

× I think I am the type of person that loving the life in urban areas.

✓ I think I am the type of person who loves life in urban areas.

'That loving' is incorrect: you need a relative pronoun (who/that) plus a finite verb. Use 'who loves' for third person singular subject 'I' as part of the noun phrase 'the type of person who loves...'. Also 'the life' is unnatural; use 'life' without the definite article. Suggestion: use 'who loves' and drop 'the' before 'life'.

× Honestly, I love visiting other countries because it give me a whole new perspective on my life.

✓ Honestly, I love visiting other countries because it gives me a whole new perspective on my life.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular present tense verb 'gives' (adds -s). The error is missing the -s on the verb. Suggestion: remember to add -s for third person singular present.

× Uh, sometimes the food, the people, uh, the trees, the different planets.

✓ Sometimes the food, the people, and the trees give me new experiences.

This fragment lists nouns without a verb or clear relation to the previous sentence, creating a sentence structure error. Also 'the different planets' is likely unintended or incorrect in context; I replaced it with a complete clause that connects the listed items to the speaker's experience. Suggestion: provide a verb to complete the thought or integrate the list into the previous sentence (e.g., '...because the food, the people, and the trees offer new experiences').