视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and single odd words (like “King”). Use linking words to connect ideas. Aim for 2–4 sentences and correct simple grammar (e.g., singular/plural, word order).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing mountains and beaches because the light and colours change a lot at different times of day. Also, I enjoy cityscapes for their architectural details and busy streets, which give interesting contrasts in my photos.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence and a clear reason with a specific example. Use correct grammar for comparisons and avoid double negatives. Use linking words like “because” and “however” to organize your answer. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse architecture and lively street scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing old buildings and colourful markets, which provide interesting details that rural landscapes usually don't have.

建议: Make your preference clear in one sentence, then give a reason and a short example. Avoid hesitation words (uh, umm) and unclear contradictions. If you are unsure, say so briefly and explain why. Use linking words like “however” or “although” for contrast.

示例: Although I have seen many cities in my country, I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultures and architectural styles. However, if I visited more unknown places at home, I would also enjoy photographing them because I love my country’s scenery.

× Yes I do. I like taking pictures of mountains, the beach, the city, everything. What I see like beautiful place and views are also dependent on how the places look. King.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of mountains, the beach, the city — everything. What I consider beautiful places and views also depends on how the places look.

The original sentences have unclear structure and incorrect word choices. 'What I see like beautiful place' is ungrammatical; use 'What I consider beautiful places and views' to express opinion. 'Are also dependent on' should be 'also depends on' to agree with the singular subject 'what I consider...'. Also add commas and punctuation for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Mostly in urban areas, because it's the city you can to have lots of beautiful places.

✓ Mostly in urban areas, because in the city you can find lots of beautiful places.

The phrase 'you can to have' is incorrect; English uses the bare infinitive after modal-like 'can' (e.g., 'can find'). Also 'it's the city' is awkward here; use 'in the city' for location. This corrects verb usage and sentence structure. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I don't even say that in rural areas there it hasn't got some beautiful places.

✓ I don't mean that rural areas don't have some beautiful places.

'I don't even say that' is unnatural; 'I don't mean that' conveys the intended meaning. 'There it hasn't got' is ungrammatical — use 'don't have' for plural noun 'rural areas'. This fixes sentence structure and verb choice. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Yeah, there is also had, but not like an urban.

✓ Yes, there are some, but not as many as in urban areas.

'There is also had' mixes tenses and is ungrammatical. Use present 'there are some' for countable plural. 'Not like an urban' is incorrect; compare quantity with 'not as many as in urban areas.' This fixes tense, agreement, and comparison. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× I have seen lots of the cities in my country, that's why I prefer views in my in other countries.

✓ I have seen many cities in my country, which is why I prefer views in other countries.

'Lots of the cities' is awkward; use 'many cities'. 'Prefer views in my in other countries' contains extra words and wrong word order — remove 'my in' and use 'other countries'. Also replace the comma splice with 'which is why' for a clear connection. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× But if I have a choose even I didn't umm see the places in the my country, I mostly will choose my country.

✓ But if I had a choice and hadn't seen the places in my country, I would mostly choose my country.

Use the correct noun 'choice' (not 'choose'). For this hypothetical past situation use past perfect 'hadn't seen' and conditional 'would choose' (second conditional form). Remove filler words ('umm') and extra article 'the' before 'my country'. This fixes word choice, tense, and conditional structure. (Grammar problem type ID: 7)